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Hi there! Pony123 here for a review! This piece is very interesting in the way you chose to write it. I like how you ended it, but I would make ...

Hi there! Pony123 here to make a review! Nice job on your story here! I was immediately intrigued! I felt like the character was very realistic and you portrayed her ...

Hi, Pony123 here to review. First off, wonderful story here! I love the format of it all, and your style is amazing! I only have a few comments to make: ...

Hi there, Pony123 here to do a review! First off, I love the imagery, It really drew me into the story. I could really invision it. You also have great ...

Hi DeepCrystal, Pony123 here! :) You have really blown me away with this chapter, great dialogue, amazing descriptions. It's outclassed what I have seen before. I loved the ending! Nitpick: ...

Hi, DeepCrystal. Pony123 here again for a review. I love the style, as previously mentioned, and the character in this piece. You can go from any emotion at any time. ...

Hey DeepCrystal, Pony123 here to review! I like your descriptions and the style in this piece. Very quaint at times, but also very intense. I like that. :) You have ...

Hi there, Pony123 here to review, As a violinist, I find this piece touching. I loved your word choice and structure. My favorite line is the last line, "lies finished ...

Hi there, Pony123 here to review. I have total one word for this piece WOW!!!! I love the "Mother o' Mother" part and the "How old was he?" line. One ...

Hi there, Pony123 here to review. I really liked how you used the large vocabulary, but made it seem like little kid words. I also like the second line. You ...

Hi Timmyjake! Pony123 here to review. Your writing excels in the class of humor, which shines through in this piece. You really made the characters sound realistic and sardonic. Nice ...

Hi there! Pony123 here to review. First off, may I say I don't agree with your points. I'm going to guarantee that you are going to get some controversial replies. ...

Hi there hopeless03! Pony123 here to review! Great job on a first poem. Mine was like something about a cat and a hat. (I don't know if you could call ...

Hi there! Pony123 here to review. You have a awesome poem.I like the first stanza alot! It is overall very good with rhythm. I do think it would be easier ...

Hi Deadman! Pony123 here to review! Great story, great rythem, ugggh, rhythm, I can't spell that word:) You have the basics of a great poem here! The only part that ...