I could perfectly imagine the similes and metaphors as well as analogies and personifications you so vividly and aesthetically prettily written. The first stanza feels like a Sapphic poem comparing nature to a relationship/friendship, whether it's romantic or platonic - that's for the reader to analyze and choose/decide. The second stanza is super smooth and the transition from rose to violin - that honestly was breathtaking and I gasped out loud because of the imagery that displayed within my mind. It was beautiful and majestic and jawdroppingly incredible. The third stanza is relatable in the universal sense. Overall, this poem is beautifully breathtaking and incredibly lovely. Fabulous job of writing this masterpiece.
- Lil, aka HalfheartedAmateur
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