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Hi, Pineapple here for a little review! Wow, this poem was a great read. It was short and sweet yet made the reader ponder. It sort of told a story ...

Hey :) Wow, I really enjoyed reading your poem. It was very emotional and interesting to read. I found the title "Tin Man" to also be cool too, it definitely ...

Hi, Pineapple here for a little review! I really enjoyed reading your poem. The conspicuous title was the first thing that caught my eye. As I started reading I got ...

Hi! I crossed your poem and it looked interesting. And it was! This poem illustrated regret and making a mistake the narrator wished they could take back. My overall favorite ...

Hi, Torres, thought I'd drop by for a review. Well, this wasn't your typical "love" poem which I found interesting. It was about young love or first love that didn't ...

Hi, FireEyes, I stumbled on your poem and thought I'd read it. First, your writing is fantastic. It showed so much emotion and hurt. It was a poem about being ...

Hi, Pineapple here for a little review! I enjoyed reading this poem immensely. It was a good way of symbolizing heartbreak and resentment. The poem was also depicting how the ...

Hi, Pineapple here for a review. Not what I was expecting from the title. The first line actually confused me but then I started to realize what you were trying ...

Hi, Pineapple here for a little review. First of all, wow, you are an amazing writer. I loved Arvia's bold character. I also liked how you crafted her death scene. ...

Hey, Pineapple here for a review! First, excellent word choice. You didn't say something like "to his house" you used a word that I hadn't even heard of! I like ...

Hi there, SilverNight! I really liked this poem. It was a very good read and interesting. The poem had some symbolism of loving someone in it. I especially loved the ...

Hi, Liminality! First, very good word choice. I loved the words like "compendium" and "textual". As I was reading, it was a little confusing but as I got more into ...

Hey! I just read your poem and thought I'd drop a review. I liked the number increase. You skipped 7 numbers. It illustrated how many thoughts and ideas are in ...

Hi, MapleWay! First, I want to say that you did a great job writing this. You used really good imagery. I could perfectly see this sunset you were writing about ...

Whoa. This is a story where it makes the reader think. It definitely made me think. It was also very depressing and filled with sadness, especially towards then. When a ...