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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Silence

    Hi drapedinksy! I'm just getting back to using the Young Writer's Society after a few years, and your poem was the first one I wanted to read! You really capture ...

    Feb 25
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: at least i'm not oblivious

    Hi, @mothbroth, Pineapple here for a little review! First off, I apologize for the lateness of this review but I just came across this poem recently. It is a beautiful ...

    Aug 12, 2022
  • Poetry » General, General Re: i don't have to be your true north anymore.

    Hey, SilverNight, Pineapple here for a little review! First and foremost, I absolutely loved reading this poem. You highlighted the sadness and later joy of getting out of toxic relationship. ...

    Jul 16, 2022
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: I Fell in Love Once

    Hi, tgirl, Pineapple here for a short review. My apologies for being late to review. I just happened to stumble across this poem and thought I would give it a ...

    Jun 6, 2022
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: relearning how to swim (and sink)

    Hi, mothbroth, Pineapple here for a short review! From the beautiful imagery to the deep message, this poem was lovely to read. I enjoyed it immensely. Though, I may be ...

    May 7, 2022
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: don't forget about me

    Hello, nykolasandrews, Pineapple here for a short review. First off, I hope you are having a lovely day. Secondly, I absolutely loved reading this poem. It was short, and simple ...

    Apr 28, 2022
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Easy

    Hi, AlyTheBookworm, Pineapple here for a small review! I absolutely loved your poem. It was a short, relatable one about unrequited love. It seemed so realistic and I bet a ...

    Mar 4, 2022
  • Poetry » Romantic, Literature Re: Glimpse of love

    Hi there, Pineapple here for a small review! I liked your angle of describing "love" most just as an emotion but as an object and person. I had never though ...

    Feb 16, 2022
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: i told him

    Hey there, FireEyes, Pineapple here for a short review! I loved this poem. It was very realistic and relatable to not only me but many other teen viewers out there. ...

    Feb 16, 2022
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: take me with you

    Hi @dancingontheclouds, Pineapple here for a short review! I really enjoyed reading this poem. It was short, sweet, and had a recurring theme. I love the sort of trope of ...

    Feb 13, 2022
  • Short Story » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Please don't be in love with someone else

    Hi, wyd.evie, Pineapple here for a short review! I thought this was a very well-written story. It illustrated the good and bad parts of a teenage romance that you wrote ...

    Feb 2, 2022
  • Poetry » Romantic, Literature Re: Far away

    Hi, LostWriter, Pineapple here for a short review! I absolutely loved this poem. It was short, sweet, and heartfelt. You paint a beautiful story about not being close to your ...

    Feb 1, 2022
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Around the World

    Hi, leleparadise, Pineapple here for a little review! I really liked this poem. It was very realistic and I'm sure a bunch of us readers can relate to it. You ...

    Dec 8, 2021
  • Short Story » Health, Realistic Re: Peanut Butter Cookies

    Hi, TheOffBroadwayAuthor, Pineapple here for a short review! First off, I absolutely thought this was a beautifully written piece. From the title, it seems like a simple story but as ...

    Oct 4, 2021
  • Short Story » Romantic, Narrative Re: Falling into Love

    Hi, eilisBK, Pineapple here for a short review! First off, I really enjoyed reading your short story. I thought it was beautifully crafted and well-written. You seem to really describe ...

    Oct 4, 2021


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