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  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
    Re: at least i'm not oblivious

    Hi, @mothbroth, Pineapple here for a little review! First off, I apologize for the lateness of this review but I just came across this poem recently. It is a beautiful ...

    Aug 11, 2022


  • Hey, SilverNight, Pineapple here for a little review! First and foremost, I absolutely loved reading this poem. You highlighted the sadness and later joy of getting out of toxic relationship. ...

    Jul 15, 2022

  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic
    Re: I Fell in Love Once

    Hi, tgirl, Pineapple here for a short review. My apologies for being late to review. I just happened to stumble across this poem and thought I would give it a ...

    Jun 6, 2022

  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
    Re: relearning how to swim (and sink)

    Hi, mothbroth, Pineapple here for a short review! From the beautiful imagery to the deep message, this poem was lovely to read. I enjoyed it immensely. Though, I may be ...

    May 6, 2022

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: don't forget about me

    Hello, nykolasandrews, Pineapple here for a short review. First off, I hope you are having a lovely day. Secondly, I absolutely loved reading this poem. It was short, and simple ...

    Apr 28, 2022

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other
    Re: Easy

    Hi, AlyTheBookworm, Pineapple here for a small review! I absolutely loved your poem. It was a short, relatable one about unrequited love. It seemed so realistic and I bet a ...

    Mar 3, 2022

  • Poetry » Romantic, Literature
    Re: Glimpse of love

    Hi there, Pineapple here for a small review! I liked your angle of describing "love" most just as an emotion but as an object and person. I had never though ...

    Feb 15, 2022

  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic
    Re: i told him

    Hey there, FireEyes, Pineapple here for a short review! I loved this poem. It was very realistic and relatable to not only me but many other teen viewers out there. ...

    Feb 15, 2022

  • Poetry » Other, General
    Re: take me with you

    Hi @dancingontheclouds, Pineapple here for a short review! I really enjoyed reading this poem. It was short, sweet, and had a recurring theme. I love the sort of trope of ...

    Feb 12, 2022

  • Short Story » Romantic, Teen Fiction
    Re: Please don't be in love with someone else

    Hi, wyd.evie, Pineapple here for a short review! I thought this was a very well-written story. It illustrated the good and bad parts of a teenage romance that you wrote ...

    Feb 1, 2022

  • Poetry » Romantic, Literature
    Re: Far away

    Hi, LostWriter, Pineapple here for a short review! I absolutely loved this poem. It was short, sweet, and heartfelt. You paint a beautiful story about not being close to your ...

    Jan 31, 2022

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: Around the World

    Hi, leleparadise, Pineapple here for a little review! I really liked this poem. It was very realistic and I'm sure a bunch of us readers can relate to it. You ...

    Dec 7, 2021

  • Short Story » Health, Realistic
    Re: Peanut Butter Cookies

    Hi, TheOffBroadwayAuthor, Pineapple here for a short review! First off, I absolutely thought this was a beautifully written piece. From the title, it seems like a simple story but as ...

    Oct 4, 2021

  • Short Story » Romantic, Narrative
    Re: Falling into Love

    Hi, eilisBK, Pineapple here for a short review! First off, I really enjoyed reading your short story. I thought it was beautifully crafted and well-written. You seem to really describe ...

    Oct 3, 2021

  • Poetry » Culture, Lyrical
    Re: A Visitor From Far Away Lands

    Hi, MaybeAndrew, Pineapple here for a short review. I loved the concept of this poem. In the beginning, I was confused, but then it clicked, the analogy of the ship ...

    Aug 3, 2021


Perhaps it is better to wake up after all, even to suffer, rather than to remain a dupe to illusions all one's life.
— Kate Chopin, The Awakening