phantomwriterjoe

I like this poem and I like the rhyme. I like the way the speaker feels about this girl he is in love with. It shows that he cherishes her ...

Okay, so first thing I thought was how pretty this poem sounded. I like the word choices you made. Stanza Analysis First Stanza: "Thine eyes do flit from mine to ...

Interesting poem. I feel that what you are speaking about in this poem is a little bit deeper than what it appears to be. In the first stanza, you describe ...

I LOOOOOVE this poem lol. It's cute and flowery like spring; I can see why you titled it the way you did. I do believe, however, that anything is one ...

Okay, so this is a story about someone out in the snow and it is miserable. She doesn't know why she's out there, but she is. Death comes, and tries ...

So this poem is easy enough to understand and pretty enough to entice the reader to read on. My understanding of the poem is this; there is a thunderstorm, there ...

Okay, so the first part is the reflection. The speaker is describing how she is like a reflection; she is describing how she reflects back certain attitudes and such to ...

Wow another one of your poems that I liked for the same reason as the other two. It's sweet, and this one actually was my favorite so far because the ...

Replace "waked her up" with "woke her up". There also seems to be a problem with tenses. You switch from present tense to past tense, and then back to present ...

Okay so this was a strange poem that led me along quite well until I got to the part about zombies lol. At that point, I realized it was more ...

Okay, so right away I could tell this was the same writer as the one who wrote "Look at Swan" even before I spotted your avatar (which you might want ...

So I'm going to write this review without looking at any of the other comments below because I want to try and see what you were getting out and then ...

Hello, I like this poem. It's sweet. Some of the rhymes are quite nice. The last stanza doesn't flow quite as well as the rest of the poem though. It's ...

Wow I really like this one. It's short and to the point, emotional, and true. In the first stanza, the speaker voices her assumption that someone would be noticeably in ...

So this is easy enough to understand, and I could pretty much guess at what this poem was going to be about by the title. Like so often seems to ...