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Hello! I'm here to review on behalf of the Earth Benders! I'm going to give you a few specific things here and there as I read. At "“We all did. ...

Wow! This fanfiction is just getting better and better!! It's so intense!! I left a review on your first one, and you can expect me to continue until you use ...

Alright. I want to start off with compliments: OH MY GOODNESS ATTACK ON TITAN IS AWESOME, AND IT'S AWESOME THAT YOU CHOSE TO WRITE A FANFIC. XD Ok. I want ...

One quick thing I'd like to say that also applies to your other poem I've read, Life Counts, is how you break up your lines. You kind of split the ...

Wow. This is deserving of all the likes and more. If someone can't relate to this, they haven't experienced life. This is so beautiful, and I am so touched by ...

Whoa. Holy. Crap. Can I say AMAZING?! You like... made me fangirl! Oh my word! So many meanings! So much symbolism! So many feels! -gets fangirling out of system- Ok. ...

One quick thing I'd like to say is I think it would look cooler if all the lines were capitalized. This poem is confusing until the last line, and that's ...

Hi! Just know I'm reviewing this as I go. XD In the first line, "On Christmas Eve, the animals in woods," needs a 'the' before woods. Here, ""Oh, Owl!" squeaked ...

Wow. This poem is... wow. Completely in a good way XD I really love it! It seems like this was meant to be in stanzas, and a way you can ...

I have a couple quick revision things. Poetry should follow all normal punctuation rules, so you definitely need some end punctuation and commas. Instead of "Spiraled my thoughts like a ...

Oh, wow. This poem is intense, and it's awesome. One thing I must say is you need to follow all normal punctuation rules in poetry. Something else that you should ...

Holy cows, do I love this poem! I'm so glad I came across it. A couple things I'd like to say are for revision purposes are that all lines of ...

Beautiful poem! I love the imagery! It brings so much peace. The first thing I noticed, though, was that you put commas at the end of every line. I can ...

Intriguing poem! One thing I'd like to help with is that all lines of a poem are capitalized. You seem to understand that poetry follows all normal punctuation rules. I ...

Wow. Amazing! You've got poetry down! There are a couple things I'd like to say for possible improvement. You need to have all normal punctuation in poems. You are missing ...