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Hello Lightsong~ I think you did a good job conveying the message of the story you're telling here. There are just a few things that I would fix if I ...

Hi Pocket~ I'm sorry, but this is going to be a relatively short review. Your piece is fantastic, and if I remember correctly, so was the last piece of yours ...

Hey Kyll~ I promised myself I would come back and review this, so here I am. The first stanza just blows me away. The imagery you use is completely fantastic, ...

Hello Tock ("Tick" just didn't sound as good)~ This is interesting. While you portray your ideas in a simple and very straightforward way, the complexities behind them make you think. ...

Hello Pocket~ Forgive me, for this is my first review in a long while. I thought this piece was very clever. Your metaphors nearly always succeeded to connect not only ...

Hey Lau~ It took me a while to get here, I know, but here I am. :) First of all, this is so much better than your first chapter in ...

Hi Lau! This was intriguing; I was constantly engaged when reading. Please continue this and keep me posted on the publishing of future chapters. I loved this. There were a ...

Hello~ To give you my honest opinion, the problem here is with the way you executed this idea. It's ill described. It's already somewhat of a cliche theme that you're ...

Hello Mil~ First off, welcome to the site! I hope you have a great time here. I assure you that criticism given by your reviewers is strictly constructive for the ...

Hey disillusioned~ Although I see you're new to the site, you seem to be fitting right in. I have recently started writing freestyle poetry, and personally, I enjoy reading it ...

Hi Retro~ This was pretty cool—and I mean that in the most reverent of ways, as I can assume this subject is deeply personal to you. But it was "cool" ...

Oh captain my captain~ The thing about this poem is this: while your message does hold a lot of truth, relatability, and a nice flow, it doesn't make me feel ...

Hey ironnovelist~ This was pretty neat; simplicity has always been something that I've struggled with as a writer, so to see someone execute it so flawlessly is a relief. However, ...

Hey Bee~ This was an interesting idea you toyed with here; the idea that "silence speaks a thousand words" and that even the smallest sounds can trigger some kind of ...

Oooh hi Morrigan~ Your poem reminded me of a poem by Tyler Knott Gregson; "We are just pieces of people and between us lifetimes wasted trying to convince ourselves that ...