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contrary to the previous poem of yours that I reviewed, I thought the repetition didn't retain as much impact here. it got a bit redundant. your imagery was consistent, but ...

hi there. I thought the repetition was an effective tool in this piece. in general, I find poems written on the topic of writer's block (whether for therapeutic value or ...

I like the simple introduction, and the theme you chose to interweave is intriguing. I'm not exactly sure about the meaning of the title but its combination of brevity and ...

I like the premise. I begin a lot of reviews this way, and I think it's because while many authors can brainstorm brilliant ideas, they lack the ability to execute. ...

your lines are blunt and they bite, and I love that. word conservation is so important, and in my opinion, you do it to near perfection in this piece. your ...

hi there! The rhyme scheme actually really helped you convey the premise of your message. I'm not always fond of rhyming poetry, but in this case, your delivery (at least ...

hey there, sound! I like the premise of this, but I feel like the idea lacks the proper execution. The bulk of your context lies within the title of the ...

Hey there! I promised to write a review when I got the motivation, and at the moment I happen to have some handy. So with no further preface, here we ...

(This is definitely overdue, and for that I'm profusely apologetic. But better late than never.) I love when a piece starts off in such a fashion: 'the scariest part is' ...

Hello. I don't believe I've ever reviewed lyrics before, but this caught my eye, and I decided that it was more than worthy of a review. First of all, I ...

You already have some nice reviews on this, but I remembered recently that I started this review about the time that this piece was posted. So, awhile ago, but props ...

Hey there! I'll tell you right from go: I have little criticism, because I enjoyed this. You incorporate many subtle but powerful comparisons, and have a talent for developing your ...

mimesis in red lipstick on the bathroom mirror. You start off with a bang. Immediately, the first line strikes me. Mimesis (I googled the word because I was unsure of ...

Aloha ~ To begin, I want to say that I'm not entirely sure what this is about. You've written a lot of verse that seems almost nonsensical, and you've worded ...

Hi there ~ This was very clever. I've actually read a lot of shorts recently that trick the reader into believing the protagonist is human, and then revealing at the ...