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Omg this is so good it has alot of emotion I just love it its just very captivating abd and I like the concept of it.I dont knw what else ...

Very true I like the concept of this poem I just wish you extend more on it its a terrifically written.just love it no other way to put it .but ...

Wow! I really like ut veru strong for a first piece . I really like the concept and meaning ifbthe poem .the only thing i really hav negative well suggestion ...

Ok well im not gonna do a long ahh paragraph but I like how its short bc it shows ur creative on how u can say so much in a ...

Hiya ! Maybe its jus me but my only negative comment is the flw and some of the word choices .I really get how u feel I jus think it ...

I like it bc its postive and all but ill like to see the gud and bad n life bc there both . Some like l-laughs and lust idk any ...

I like it nice simple but ill like if to also point out the great things in life it seems like its all the negative in life but other then ...

Hiya im not here to point out any of your flaws onlybthe good in your poem .I personaly like the length of it bc I write so little also just ...

Im not goin to repest wat erryone else said but I really like it its very relatable to me . I like the concept and the flow of the poem ...

Very good poem I reallly like it sweet and sentimental . I wonder were your inspiration bc its soo captivating and jus wanna knw wss it jus an oh im ...

I love the poem how real it is and how its like a movie u get a warning before watching it its jus like a little form of a warning ...

I like how u told alot in so little lines I have a poem short too but anyway I really liked it the only comment I have is the last ...

My reviews are usual about how I like the poem I try to stay away from the mistakes bc I want to encourage u to keep writing and if u ...

I likd the length of the poem and the style you used in the poem I really dont critique grammar and punctuation bc j suck at that too and theres ...

I like the concept of the poem how the cuts kept getting more and more leading to the end my only thing is what inspired u to write this bc ...