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  • Script » General, General Re: Done

    Scriptwriting is my field, i does it better because i am a professional; i spent years learning about the craft, i know a good script if i see anyone. That ...

    Jul 7, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: A Day at School

    The title {A Day at School) of your poem will really engage your reader, i love the poem, in fact i am in love with it already I really dislike ...

    Jul 7, 2016
  • Script » Film, Teen Fiction Re: A Work In Progress - (Screenplay)

    My friend you did a great job and i will like to commend your effort and creativity - it shows you have passion for writing. Scriptwriting is my field of ...

    Jul 7, 2016
  • Script » Action / Adventure, Dramatic Re: Their Kingdom #1

    As a scriptwriter and a professional writer, i believe i would be the right person to review your script. Honestly, I don't like the dialogue in your script and your ...

    Jul 6, 2016
  • Script » Theatre, Literature Re: Undeniably Mad

    The three-act structure is a model used in screenwriting that divides a fictional narrative into three parts, often called the Setup, the Confrontation and the Resolution. (you used the three ...

    Jul 6, 2016
  • Script » Humor, Teen Fiction Re: Band Practice

    As a scriptwriter tutor for three years now, i am really impressed with the way you arranged the script, it shows you are in the business of screenwriting. One thing ...

    Jul 6, 2016
  • Script » Realistic, Other Re: Daddys Greif

    Scriptwriting is my field and i am here to review your script. First and furmost, you need to be very sure that you want to write a script before you ...

    Jul 6, 2016
  • Script » Science Fiction, Dramatic Re: Didn't recognize her.

    Your job as a scriptwriter is to help your readers or viewers understand the scope of your writing in a glance. To be honest with you, i don't like the ...

    Jul 6, 2016
  • Script » Theatre, Teen Fiction Re: Another Short Film Script

    Scripting writing is a craft that must be understood - if you want to be an outstanding screen writer you must pay attention to the rules. You did not pay ...

    Jul 6, 2016
  • Script » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: Attitude Is Everything

    Scriptwriting is not bed of roses my dear - you need to learn the craft before you can do it better. i agree with other people reviews but in other ...

    Jul 5, 2016
  • Script » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Gone Fishing

    If you were nominated as one of newyork academy award nominee - i will be glad to vote for you with my whole heart. honestly, one of my students in ...

    Jul 5, 2016
  • Script » Dramatic, Film Re: Feature Presentation

    My passion is in writing but i am a trained script writer with seven years experience, so this is my field of writing. i have succeeded in training 300 students ...

    Jul 5, 2016
  • Script » Politics, Realistic Re: Brain

    Scriptwriting is my field and i would be telling you about it. First and foremost, you did a good job, i must really confess. Whether it’s a work of fiction, ...

    Jul 5, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Realistic Re: 1997

    I like the ideas you presented in this story - you are creative and natural with the way you write. i give you my recommendation. I really enjoyed and fell ...

    Jul 5, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: ​The Madonna that never exists

    most of my students will not love this poem but it is well composed anyway. i wondered what gave you the inspiration to write this poem, i must commend your ...

    Jul 4, 2016


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