noninjaes

This piece is rather overwhelming and ineffectual. Most of it consists of what appears to be rambling and you don't exactly get to the point. A lot of unnecessarily long ...

Hallo there. I'm here to review for you! :D To open on a positive note, you've opened this poem with wonderful imagery. Really, the poem as a whole creates a ...

Hallo Tenyo! < 3 One shiny review for you today. This poem is rather sweet and nice. The flow is generally good and the soft rhymes really add a nice ...

A smaller than usual review from me today, but it's almost midnight and I want to get in at least one review this review day. :) I found this poem ...

Hallo there! One sane not done at 2am review as promised. Most of the other reviews have focused more on grammar and wording, so I think I might skip most ...

One snazzy little review sneaking in here! I must say, my general impression of this poem is a rather pleasant one. The rhyme scheme and flow is in most places, ...

I really think you should've put this under the poetry category. It would have made a marvelous piece in there. Either way, this is still a remarkable piece. In this ...

This is a rather good poem, filled with plenty of raw emotion and thought. I must say, I rather like this poem. :) Your flow is nice and clean and ...

Hello lillymoore, this is a nice and sweet poem you've written here. :D The flow of the poem is rather nice, with little hitches even with the lack of a ...

A short but sweet review for you today my friend. :) You've written a good article here, with with right amount of humor without making it too inappropriate. The little ...

Hello Antonio and welcome to YWS! I'm here for a more general review today. I first must say that I rather enjoyed reading your poem. I don't think I've ever ...

Hello, noni here for my second review of the night! I'm not really sure what to think about this poem. The words imply a great amount of emotion but the ...

I must say that I enjoyed reading this poem. The first line really drew me in; such a bold and blunt statement really helped set the feel of this poem. ...

By the looks of things, you're new here so welcome to YWS and I hope this review helps. This poem here certainly has potential, but is very rough and pointy. ...

*Dusts keyboard off.* Man, it's been quite a while since I've last reviewed. I'm not sure whether or not I like this piece, all I know is that it is ...