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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Historical Fiction Re: A Magpie Witching - 1

    To start, I do like 'A Magpie Witching' as the title. It has an air of mystique about it that seems rather fitting so far. Anyhow, on my first reading ...

    Apr 13, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Am I, I Am

    Hallo. A short review here today. The main thing that sticks out in this poem is the formatting of the line structures. The open and broken form really helps reinforce ...

    Jul 14, 2013
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: "I've Seen a Little Fairy"

    Hallo Yubbies. Noni here to give you a short but hopefully helpful review today. :) This is a nice, cutesy poem and has potential to be a good poem. The ...

    Jul 13, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Etiquette

    This is a good poem, Epic. I don't have time for a full-blown review right now, so just a quick comment: The imagery you've created in this really comes through, ...

    Apr 5, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Summer

    Hallo there! I'm here to write a short review for you today! This was a nice, interesting poem to read. The rhyme added a nice touch to this piece, giving ...

    Feb 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: A Potion to Make You Smarter

    Hallo there, Vereen, I am here to review for you, today! :D This certainly is an interesting potion. I've got no idea how the title (besides the potion part) fits ...

    Feb 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: (after the train)

    A rather short review here for you today. Oh, and I have to put this in here: Schadenfreude. This certainly is an interesting poem you've written. Overall, it is rather ...

    Feb 24, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Rain

    Hallo there! I'm here to give you a short review today. This certainly was an interesting way to format a poem, though I can't really say I liked it. I ...

    Feb 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Sacred

    A very short and general review for you today. :) This a nice, short poem. The rhyme and rhythm are that of your standard lyrical poem. Though, it isn't as ...

    Feb 24, 2013
  • Other » Other, General Re: Fading Away

    Hallo Ephe, I am here to review for you today. :) First, I must day, this is an extremely poetic piece of prose. So much that it would easily fit ...

    Feb 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: she who is more fickle than lady love (edited)

    Hallo Day! I'm here to review your poem today! :D To start off, I really like how you've written this like a poetic dictionary entry. This certainly is a style ...

    Feb 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Facade

    Hallo there! I'm here for a shorter review today. :) This is obviously a rather emotional and personal piece. I'm not entirely a fan of reviewing those as I feel ...

    Feb 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: The Cane

    Hallo there, I'm here to review your poem for you today. (The title certainly drew me in.) When reading this poem, the thing that stood out the most was the ...

    Feb 24, 2013
  • Lyrics » Politics, Other Re: Last Stage - Flash Fiction 500 Word Limit

    Morning, tronks. I am here to review for you today. :) I don't really read flash fiction that much, but when I do, I certainly can enjoy a well written ...

    Feb 24, 2013
  • Other » Literature, Other Re: A riddle for you - What am I?

    Hallo Cosmo! I'm here to review this riddle for you today. I must say, I do enjoy riddles and this one has gotten me rather perplexed. Reading through the words ...

    Feb 24, 2013


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