Hello! Sarah here for a quick review.
Well...um..hmm. I'm not really sure how I'm supposed to review this, as I've never seen a riddle submitted on YWS before! Way to go pioneering into the unknown. xD It definitely does qualify as literature because you have some nice poetic phrases in there! I especially like the "shivers" line. So creepy!
I guess my one suggestion, coming from a poet's point of view, would be to give this piece more closure. The "touch or tickle" line seems to light and happy to end an overall creepy riddle. Maybe you can add something a bit more dramatic or final?
Hope this helps, and you officially have me stumped. What is it??? TELL ME!!! xD
But seriously, nice work.
Sarah
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