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Re: I promise, my darling
Hello Bball41, Myjaspercat here for a review... Alright now, so this poem is cute, it kind of in a way makes me smile so good job on that. But I ...
May 29, 2015 -
Re: Her Boss | Unedited
Hello ArtStyx, Myjaspercat here for a review... So my overall thoughts of this story are, it's cute, and it kind of works really well. Though, like most stories on this ...
May 29, 2015 -
Re: That Four Letter Word
Hello Nunyabusiness, Myjaspercat here for a review... So as a first thought, before I begin my line-by-line, I want to tell you that the massive chunk of text in the ...
May 27, 2015 -
Re: .
Ok, well Hello RavenLord, Myjaspercat here for a review.... So, I'm not trying to be rude but this seems rather stereotypical. My first concern would be, how do you know ...
May 26, 2015 -
Re: Beyond the Horizon
Hello Samantha101, Myjaspercat here for your review. Oh, my ok well I'm going to try and do the best review I could but a little tip first... If you upload ...
May 26, 2015 -
Re: learning to drown
Hello Nightcrawler, Myjaspercat here for a review... So I have to say, I love this poem. I think it is really interesting. As well, I understand your struggle in how ...
May 21, 2015 -
Re: Chapter 1 - The Firestone Tower
Hello Zen, Myjaspercat here for a review... Before I go into more depth with my review, I want to mention that I think you have a really good story line ...
May 21, 2015 -
Re: Mute Does Not Mean Dumb- Chapter One
Hello Kelpies, Myjaspercat here for your review... 1. "The teacher dedicated the next few weeks to manners, not walking out on teachers, not eye-rolling, not that I was there for ...
May 18, 2015 -
Re: A Gentleman Fighter (Speaking to the Devil)
Hello theironnovelist, Myjaspercat here for a review... "rays of sunlight beat down on beige sand which warmed between my toes." ---I think if you say 'which feels warm..." the lines ...
May 17, 2015 -
Re: The Way Things Used to Be
Hello Writerspen, So I'm kind of on a review binge right now (or at least I am going to try and be) but anyways, I noticed you didn't have any ...
May 9, 2015 -
Re: Prince Derek and the Road to Nothyng Chapters 1-5
Hello rachellecarter, Myjaspercat here for your review Before I begin I would like to mention one thing: recommended don't post more then one chapter at a time. The reason behind ...
Mar 29, 2015 -
Re: Plead Insanity Chapter 2
Hello Niraco, Myjaspercat here for your review So Before I begin, I would like to mention that I haven't read your first chapter. Therefore I am coming in to this ...
Mar 29, 2015 -
Re: Sour Pill
Hello Parallelpresence, Myjaspercat here for your review Before I begin, WELCOME! It is so wonderful to find a new member. Now please don't get offended if I saw something rude ...
Mar 29, 2015 -
Re: Tenebrae Chapter 1 Part 2
Hello IssacHunt, Myjaspercat here for your review So, before I continue onwards, I would like to mention that I haven't read the first part of this chapter. I'm kind of ...
Mar 29, 2015 -
Re: The Inevitable
Hello rachellecarter, Myjaspercat here for your review So, before I begin I would love to point out that every story no matter how short or how experienced you area t ...
Mar 24, 2015