mordax

Hi there, mordax here! I love your poem and the concept it touches on. Let's get to it... I have a friend who is always cheerful who is sweet who ...

Hi there, mordax here! Let's get started. First off and foremost, I loved this poem! It was beautifully worded and decadent to read. That being said, here are my few ...

Hello, mordax here! First off, I loved this poem. I love how you paint such a vivid picture with such beautiful words. Right off the bat, this poem took me ...

Hello there, mordax here! I know you said nothing serious but I thought I'd give my two cents about this poem. This was beautifully written! I like your rhyme schemes ...

Wow! I loved this poem, wonderful job. I love how you managed to capture all of these different feelings and winds that I could visualize so well. The V section ...

Hi there! I loved this poem! Here are my comments: Pluses: I love the song imagery you used in the first stanza and how you kept it consistent. It really ...

Wow. That's it. That's the review. Wow. This story was devastatingly beautiful. I love the way you incorporate this panic and endless ache of grief through the "in and out" ...

Hi there! Let me start off with my reaction to this poem: speechless. I mean, wow, I am in awe by your talent. You managed to display this progression throughout ...

Hi there! Let me start off by saying, I absolutely adore this poem. So much. The imagery and lyrical writing you incorporate is astonishingly beautiful. You perfectly balance this sense ...

Hey there! So, let me just start off by saying... Wow. That's it. Wow. I absolutely loved this poem. Each line and word was so decadent, sizzling like champagne on ...

Hi there! I love this poem. It is so sweet and envelopes me with this feeling of comfort. I don't have many critiques on it, but here are the few ...

Hi there! I loved this poem so much! So let's get started: When can I see you again? Will it be on heaven or on land? My only dying wish ...

Hello! I absolutely loved this poem. Such beautiful imagery. You did a marvelous job of connecting this action of sewing to something deeper within the soul, showing how it's not ...

Hello there... Let's get started. So in my previous review, I stated some confusion on whether or not influence was innate. Ignore that. I see here that it is, and ...

Hi again!! I loved, loved, loved this part! I am finally beginning to get a true grasp on what influence is, and I love the concept. Although, I hope it ...