Since the beginning of time, human beings have always been obsessed with the idea of searching for heaven and finding idealistic places to live. Wind-Traveler encapsulates this idea perfectly. It is so clever how the author begins by describing a land of perfection before illustrating how we fantasize about "wind-travelers" and the comforts that come with them. In addition, beautiful imagery is fabricated with word choice and captivating description. My only suggestion is to create a stronger divide between the first 2 stanzas and the second 2 stanzas. This way the contrast between a faultless world and reality is more apparent. Work like this is the reason I love poetry.
Points: 491
Reviews: 21
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