mkultra98

I like how this is based on the classic symbol of the yellow rose of friendship, and it's also interesting that the rose is symbolizing the friendship itself, not the ...

There's a lot going on here, and I'm not sure I understand it all. You have a way with words, clearly. There's some amazing imagery in here, for example the ...

This is pretty funny and witty. I wouldn't show this to the person you wrote it about, though! I especially like the line "Your colonoscopy report came in. The doctor ...

As a girl, I can say that I totally get what you are going for. I like the way the poem is organized into stanzas, and each could really be ...

No, no, no! Do not be embarrassed by these poems, they're great! They demonstrate a remarkable control of language for a ten year old. I know I couldn't write rhymes ...

I like the way the persona you create takes a nostalgic event and uses it as a way to understand another, more complicated one, a deadly car crash and the ...

I have to agree with Morrigan here. It honestly made me uncomfortable. I noted ten lines, out of the twenty, that seemed to be borrowed from Henley. Not only are ...

Oh my god. This is amazing! I was caught by the title- the first spell that Hermione casts on Harry to fix his glasses. This is a great way to ...

This is a nice way to show your opinions of abortion. I don't entirely agree with your point of view, but this poem helps people like me understand it. I ...

This is cool! I think it addresses the dark side of faith, and also the love associated with faith. The beginning confuses me a little - is the persona you ...

It's too bad that this piece ended up being stolen from its rightful owner. This is a prose poem, which is a type of poetry. I love certain phrases: "refreshing ...

Hey! I play a lot of instruments and whatnot, so I can totally connect to this poem. There's a sort of rhythmic quality to this poem, which embodies the way ...

I really like this. I believe it's part of a series? I would need to read the rest of the works in the series to grasp the subject matter, but ...

I normally am not a fan of prose poetry, but this was done incredibly well. The metaphor of strings is particularly touching, was it an allusion to the Fates of ...