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Hello! I feel as though either the title of this piece should be changed or the poem is unfinished. The idea of "lost love" doesn't exactly come in to play, ...

Not a bad piece. I like how you have brought to attention the "monsters" of the world. Whether we like it or not they are there around us everyday pretending ...

This was really entertaining, especially for a potter fan like myself. The action kept moving at a good pace and I feel you really let Snape's personality shine through. The ...

I really like this and I think that assignment is so unique! I wish we got assignments like that when I was in english :( . You've managed to take ...

Lets starts off with the fact that I really like this movie, it has to be a favourite of mine! This is a good comparison essay with strong arguments. It ...

Okay the whole time I read this I was like "this could be the prettiest, most messed up song ever!". Seriously, put some guitar to this shit! (pardon the language, ...

As a dancer as well I can really connect wit this piece. Its the exact feelings! One thing I could say is that the phrase "are all so close" was ...

I am impressed by this haiku collection, they are tough to write! Well for me anyway, so I applaud you. In addition to that complexity this is a beautiful piece ...

Okay Icarus is one of my favourite stories^.^ which is slightly morbid...oh well. Anyways on to the review! Your first line is my favourite, how you play with "son" and ...

I really really liked this. It was incredibly realistic and does not in any ways glamorize war like it so often is now a-days. I liked how well developed your ...

So, I can see where you are going with this story. It could use some development of the idea and perhaps a foreshadowing of the fall and a build up ...

Hello! I like this. It made me use my brain juices for a while. I just am not sure this should be in the short story category as it doesn't ...

I think this poem is actually very good! A few things I noticed were that I feel the second stanza should be equal in lines and that the line "Someone, ...

Okay first of all spelling/grammar errors! Your first sentence should probably go "There was a time where all I would do is think" (just to have it make more sense). ...

I completely understand this poem. Your emotions are exactly mine not so long ago, I feel for you :/ All in all I think this is a good piece of ...