lovelysayshi

Alright. Second line "I can only wonder what YOU'RE thinking" people make that mistake all the time, your is a possessive word, while you're is a compound word: you are. ...

Wow. This was beautiful. A few things I noticed...here and there you used shes, which should have been she's. Also, "He ignores her, he forgets her, he refuses to give ...

Hold it up. A poem you say? Where are the stanzas? :( awe. Those poor little stanzas. I agree with Kaylyn, there is no poetic format. Poems are usually written ...

lalallallaa...oh hi! What a lovely poem I see here, maybe I should read it. I shall! Fun reviews are always the best, am I right. Of course I am. Just ...

Hello there! Review time: Alright. I really liked this poem, not only is it great, but it is something that most teens can relate to. Wonderful poem idea! Now, there ...

Hello there! One thing I immediately caught: To make the poem flow better, in the second stanza you could have taken out "why" "Why can't it end? Why can't I ...

Hey, hey, hey! lovelysayshi here to review! (: Lets begin, okay, you need to capitalize the first letter in the beginning of each line. For Example: "Slowly my soul is ...

Hey there! Alrighty then, lets rollll! So, one thing that confused me were the first two lines in the second stanza, "Lifless ground, Longs for morning" it obviously has a ...

Hello there, lovely! What's up? Anyway, let me just say this poem kind of freaked me out, I am sure it was supposed to give that vibe though. It's kind ...

Hey, hey, hey! So, one thing I noticed is that you used quite a bit of commas when you could of used semi-colons instead. I'm like you though, I LOVE ...

BRILLIANCE! BRILLIANCE! Can I meet you, seriously. I am not joking. Okay, maybe that would be a little tricky to do...but this poem has absolutely zero flaws! The confidence is ...

This is really well written! The only things that I noticed were that no emotion was explained, it was spoken of, but you didn't really go into detail. It really ...

Wow. This is deep. It was very interesting, and it was definitely an attention-grabber. I really like how you started this piece, curiosity caught me from the very first three ...

Ahhh! I totally agree with the first two stanzas! That really hit the lovey-dovey side of me. These are great lyrics. Honestly, they are much better than half of the ...

This is great, I really love the characters, the boy and the girl. Though the readers don't know much about the boy, it is still nice to read his thoughts ...