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I can tell this kid is going to be a good writer! He has all the right elements: the imagination, and the enthusiasm. And that's the best thing of being ...

I was reading this in my history class, and I nearly cackled! This was so enjoyable and funny! ''"Who's your favorite, beta? Tell the truth." Me (sweating): "Uhh... Dad?" Mom ...

This story was supposed to be humor, and it certainly gave me a chuckle. The three witches' kind of remind me of that old Halloween movie from Disney that has ...

I really felt this poem related to me a bit. Before reading it, I noticed this part that stood out to me a lot: '' This one was about how ...

As much as physical pain hurts, nothing more can hurt than words. I feel as if you conveyed this into your poem. ''Words and knifes cause the pain of many ...

I loved reading this poem. The absolutely one reason why I enjoyed it was because the rhyming was so good. I'm not a really good rhymer when it comes to ...

I believe this poem is talking about taking an eating disorder too far, and you end up dying/going to the hospital for it. People want to look good and feel ...

I feel like this short story at least deserves more. Like a little short chapter book would be fantastic. Ysabelle sounds to me like, the daughter of a rich family ...

I like the way this story went. The ending especially caught my attention. ''The humans clawed their way from the bottom after the zombie apocalypse ended, they started thriving, they ...

I resonated with this poem a lot. I feel nervous a lot, and it tends to have my heart racing, my hands sweating, and sometimes I lose my will to ...

Jeff the killer is not my favorite creepypasta (I like laughing jack the most). But I love to read all of your stories, so I can get a good idea ...

I really liked how you tied in the feeling of betrayal with wounds. Some wounds are so deep, barely unfixable just like betrayal. Betrayal is that deep wound, that'll probably ...

Sometimes a picture can speak a thousand words, and I feel this is true with this poem as you would call it. The lamp in the picture in the darkened ...

Sigh. I love when people make relatable poems that I can relate to. This poem, I think is about transitioning into a teenager. I'm a teenager, and I firsthand understand ...

Despite how short and simple this poem is, it really has a lot of meaning behind it. ''To feel your touch To hear your voice To see your eyes As ...