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  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Horror Re: The end is near…

    This was so funny and thank you for tagging me it! Let me just jump straight into the review! ''Mariah is hovering above me, a red lipstick smile on her ...

    Fri Dec 26, 2025 9:04 pm
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: School aka Prison

    I can tell this kid is going to be a good writer! He has all the right elements: the imagination, and the enthusiasm. And that's the best thing of being ...

    Mon Dec 15, 2025 7:01 pm
  • Short Story » Humor, Realistic Re: Mischievous life

    I was reading this in my history class, and I nearly cackled! This was so enjoyable and funny! ''"Who's your favorite, beta? Tell the truth." Me (sweating): "Uhh... Dad?" Mom ...

    Mon Dec 15, 2025 5:47 pm
  • Script » Dramatic, Humor Re: The Witches and The Boy

    This story was supposed to be humor, and it certainly gave me a chuckle. The three witches' kind of remind me of that old Halloween movie from Disney that has ...

    Mon Dec 15, 2025 3:37 pm
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Anaesthetic

    I really felt this poem related to me a bit. Before reading it, I noticed this part that stood out to me a lot: '' This one was about how ...

    Mon Dec 15, 2025 3:29 pm
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Health Re: Words and Knifes

    As much as physical pain hurts, nothing more can hurt than words. I feel as if you conveyed this into your poem. ''Words and knifes cause the pain of many ...

    Fri Dec 12, 2025 7:15 pm
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Fantasy Re: Dig Up Her Bones

    I loved reading this poem. The absolutely one reason why I enjoyed it was because the rhyming was so good. I'm not a really good rhymer when it comes to ...

    Fri Dec 12, 2025 3:42 pm
  • Short Story » Narrative, Health Re: “You know you’ll die, right?”

    I believe this poem is talking about taking an eating disorder too far, and you end up dying/going to the hospital for it. People want to look good and feel ...

    Fri Dec 12, 2025 3:07 pm
  • Short Story » General, Other Re: Isn’t everyone supposed to like their Christmas gifts?

    I feel like this short story at least deserves more. Like a little short chapter book would be fantastic. Ysabelle sounds to me like, the daughter of a rich family ...

    Fri Dec 12, 2025 2:01 pm
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: They Don't Stay Dead

    I like the way this story went. The ending especially caught my attention. ''The humans clawed their way from the bottom after the zombie apocalypse ended, they started thriving, they ...

    Fri Dec 12, 2025 1:10 pm
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Counting Sheep

    I resonated with this poem a lot. I feel nervous a lot, and it tends to have my heart racing, my hands sweating, and sometimes I lose my will to ...

    Thu Dec 11, 2025 9:10 pm
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Teen Fiction Re: Eww…people! [Part Two]

    Jeff the killer is not my favorite creepypasta (I like laughing jack the most). But I love to read all of your stories, so I can get a good idea ...

    Thu Dec 11, 2025 3:29 pm
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Sorry...It's already Broken

    I really liked how you tied in the feeling of betrayal with wounds. Some wounds are so deep, barely unfixable just like betrayal. Betrayal is that deep wound, that'll probably ...

    Wed Dec 10, 2025 2:22 pm
  • Poetry » General, General Re: 𝙇𝙞𝙜𝙝𝙩 𝙤𝙛 𝙢𝙤𝙤𝙣 🌙

    Sometimes a picture can speak a thousand words, and I feel this is true with this poem as you would call it. The lamp in the picture in the darkened ...

    Wed Dec 10, 2025 2:12 pm
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Teenager

    Sigh. I love when people make relatable poems that I can relate to. This poem, I think is about transitioning into a teenager. I'm a teenager, and I firsthand understand ...

    Wed Dec 10, 2025 2:06 pm


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— The Bee Movie