𝙇𝙞𝙜𝙝𝙩 𝙤𝙛 𝙢𝙤𝙤𝙣 🌙

Engage ˃͈◡˂͈

Sometimes a picture can speak a thousand words, and I feel this is true with this poem as you would call it.

The lamp in the picture in the darkened sky really captures how even a small amount of light can light up a darkened sky. We all rely on the sun for light, and energy, but no one really appreciates the even small rays of light such as this light post.

Overall, I think this is a very good poem, however if you want to add a picture next time, add a few more lines, that would be more engaging, and that would help your readers understand the poem more

-xoxo, lovelydove

Hello! It's CATS here to leave a short review!
This idea of a "poem" is very unique, including a picture and one detailed, fascinating line!
That one line really inspired me and I don't know how you do it. The picture clearly makes sense, showing a rainy and stormy mood.
I really loved this. The lights of the street cast light over the dark street at night.
Only a few, but shining bright.
I really loved your amazing style
I can't wait for more!
Happy Writing, Happy Poetry, Happy RevMo, and Happy Reading!
Sincerely,
CATS

Hi Syedaminu! Welcome to YWS! Valkyria here to leave a short review/comment on your work. Let's get into it:

I don't encounter too many one-line poems in my reading experience, but it's always enjoyable when I come across one. I remember my high school English teacher challenged us to write the shortest poem we can, and I attempted to write a single line of poetry. It was tough, but really fun!

As to the content of the poem, it's a sweet and inspirational line. It's a wonderful metaphor for being kind and empathetic to others in a tough world. And I find it interesting that you chose the moon instead of the sun. I usually see the sun being a metaphor for brightness and kindness. But it's very refreshing to see the moon used instead. The photo also adds a nice touch: a peaceful vibe. Well done!