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looseleaf

  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: The Woman in My Bed

    Hello! I like how personal ad realistic this is. It is very relatable and the way you make it so simple is incredible. My favorite part was the ending, from ...

    Dec 2, 2019
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Narrative Re: sad alternate ending of the book: mice and men

    Ok so it's been a while since I've read the book, so if I get anything wrong in this review please correct me. So I think George killed Lennie in ...

    Dec 2, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Owen's story chapter 1

    Ok, the plot to this story was great, wonderful, fantastic, whatever adjective you want to use. I could tell you thought about it a lot and you included many details ...

    Dec 1, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Journey

    This was one of the best poems I have ever read. Well, I guess it's not a poem. Maybe it is, I don't know, I'll just call it a short. ...

    Dec 1, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Stuck

    Thanks for this. I really felt this piece, how the person talking is not understood and is stuck. Sometimes I feel that way, stuck and no possible way out. Thank ...

    Dec 1, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Finished

    This poem was fantastic. It was realistic and all together well written. You put so much effort into making this realistic and show how much some girls go through after ...

    Dec 1, 2019
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: Insane confession

    This story was wonderful! The plot and detail you put into it was fantastic, I wish I could read this story for the first time a thousand times (if that ...

    Dec 1, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: the perfect student

    This piece hits close to home for me. In previous grades, I would refuse to hang out with friends if I had an essay due the next week, or even ...

    Dec 1, 2019
  • Short Story » Horror, Romantic Re: The Journal

    I loved this story. It was fantastic and the wording was incredible. You are very good at adding detail and action to short stories; it really shows. The ending was ...

    Nov 29, 2019
  • Short Story » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Lilies for Benji

    That was an amazing ending. Overall, I loved it. This story breaks the gender norms and I love it! Absolutely love it! It was also very realistic. Friends being addicted ...

    Nov 29, 2019
  • Short Story » General, Other Re: Shine

    Goodness that was quite a plot twist at the end! I really like it, it was so short and clean. The 100 word limit is tough, but you created something ...

    Nov 29, 2019
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: XxAaliyahxX

    I LOOOOOVVVVVEEEEED this. I have had multiple situations like this, mostly me telling some 16 year old I'm 15, when I was (at the time) 11. I knew it's wrong, ...

    Nov 29, 2019
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Siempre

    My review is at the end. Just for anyone who doesn't speak Spanish, but doesn't want to translate this: "The crows shout your name When I walk in the dark. ...

    Nov 28, 2019
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: No Title

    I think a lot of people can relate to this poem and that is awesome. The formatting is wonderful and the wording is great. The poem is very descriptive and ...

    Nov 27, 2019
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Pearls from the Ocean Floor

    The poem is very descriptive and you can really feel the seasons. I really liked the ending and think it easily sums up this piece. The title is quirky, which ...

    Nov 27, 2019


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