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by EmoBear

Los cuervos gritan tu nombre
Cuando yo camino en la oscuridad.
En el silencio yo puedo oír tu voz,
Siempre quiero oír tu voz.

Los árboles tiemblan como yo;
Las hojas caen y flotan
Como yo cuando estoy contigo.
Yo podría caer y flotar siempre.

Mis sentimientos se fueron contigo
Como la nieve se derrite
Sin previo aviso.
Todo siempre sucedió sin previo aviso.

Recuerdo que me dijiste
“Para siempre,
Para siempre eres mía.”
Pero siempre no soy tuya.

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Thu Nov 28, 2019 11:24 pm
LZPianoGirl wrote a review...

My review is at the end. Just for anyone who doesn't speak Spanish, but doesn't want to translate this:

"The crows shout your name
When I walk in the dark.
In the silence I can hear your voice,
I always want to hear your voice.

The trees tremble like me;
The leaves fall and float
Like me when I am with you.
I could always fall and float.

My feelings went with you
How the snow melts
Without prior notice.
Everything always happened without warning.

I remember you told me
Forever you are mine. ”
But I am not always yours."

This poem is rather beautiful. The wording and detail you put in this is wonderful.

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