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This poem has a lot of potential! I would start by maybe capitalize the beginning of each line, I think it makes it look more professional. However, many writers choose ...

This is a very cute love poem. I like that it speaks of the good things about love. It's a nice breath of fresh air since many poems/writings today discuss ...

Hello! I really did like this poem. I liked how the end came as a bit of a shock, I didn't realize the friend had died, at the beginning I ...

Hello! Here for a quick review! I love the idea and message of this poem, I just don't think you executed it very well. I would suggest writing it in ...

Great job! I really liked the message of this poem. So many people today are way to focused on money and this poem really showed the downside of that. The ...

OH MY GOSH THIS WAS SO GREAT. It took me until almost the end to realize that he was talking about her funeral and not the wedding. Wow the feels. ...

Hello! I love all the metaphors in this poem. To me metaphors are simple and easy to use, but almost always work really well. You did a great job with ...

I loved this!! It is so relatable to everyone; I feel like a lot of people have gone through some type of relationship with trust issues, whether it be a ...

Hello!! I really liked this poem, it was short, simple, and got your point across. I'm no haiku expert by any means, but I really did like this one. I ...

Hey! I loved the humor and easy-going nature of this poem. It was fun to read and was a nice change from some of the darker, more intense things I've ...

Hello! I really liked this poem; it talked about a real problem in the world today. People everywhere have to deal with abusive relationships and I feel like this poem ...

I love this! I think everyone can relate to the great feeling of summer. I like that you used a lot of descriptive adjectives and imagery. It really worked well ...

I like this a lot. I love how easy it flows and is simple to understand. The message of this poem is super meaningful and I like that; a simple ...

Hello! I really liked the dark, cynical, tone of this poem. Many people cringe away from darker poetry and writing, but I am fascinated by the idea of what goes ...

Hey! I really like how short, simple, and to the point this poem is. I am a big fan of writing poetry myself, and I sometimes find myself writ in ...