leleparadise

Hello, hope all is well. Here is my review. From first glance, this is a short simple poem. I like that every two lines, you start with the same words ...

Hello, hope all is well. Here's my review. This was enjoyable to read. I like the similarities you made love to honey. And not just the liquid gold we know. ...

Hello, hope all is well. Here's my review. This definitely captured the feeling of grief, loss and guilt. I love the way you worded the first stanza. "How beautiful you ...

Hello, hope all is well. Here is my review. I love this lol It's so relatable because I grew up with cats and remember how nasty it was for one ...

Hello, hope all is well. Here for a review. First off, I enjoy the way you wrote this poem. From the first to the second stanza, you differentiate the moods ...

Hello, hope all is well. Here for a review. Wow. First let me say that this is an emotionally raw poem. You can feel the pain. You can feel the ...

Hello, hope all is well. Here for a review First, I wanna say that I appreciate you taking the time to write this piece as I'm sure it means a ...

Hello, hope all is well. Here with a review and should I say, I truly enjoyed this poem The distinct comparisons between the personalities were described very well. I loved ...

Hey, hope all is well. I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. The imagery you used to describe the setting is very nice. I can feel how hot the weather is. A ...

Hey, Lele here for a review Just wanted to say that this was good piece. It felt more like a conversation than a poem. It’s good. Feels natural, doesn’t feel ...

Hey, Lele here to review Just wanted to start by saying this is a beautiful poem I love the imagery, simple but effective. The mirrored perspectives of young and old ...

Hey, Lele here for a review Just want to start by saying this is categorized in the wrong section Moments like these are far from dramatic. And I feel for ...

Hey, Lele here for a review Just wanted to start by saying this was a fun poem to read. Quirky and funny. It feels like a story book narrator were ...

Hey, Lele here to review Just wanted to start by saying this was a good poem Because of how you prefaced with the disclaimer, it gave a different perspective of ...

Hey, Lele here for a review Wanted to start off by saying this was amazing Loved the progression of the poem. Short, sweet, to the point. Each season was described ...