Drunk on the elixir of love
I'm swaying like tree leaves
But you're my roots & anchor
So I've got nothing to worry
A film of passionate tapestries
Not a moment to spare loving you
Reality couldn't catch up to me
But like all good things that exist
The change of seasons is destined
So the embracing blanket of spring
Wraps you with its cherry blossom
And the spell whisks you away
Someday, somewhere, soon
This fever dream now broken
I'll be wondering wistfully
Missing my queen bee deeply
Honey still sweet on my tongue
And hand red from the sting
Left from the void of your name
How you warmed my heart
And froze time simultaneously
The wondrous twist of fate in which
A stranger from not so long ago
Turned every second that I spent
In her absence, seem strange instead
Yielding power in her delicate hands
To build a man up from the clay
You saved me when I was drowning
Got me on the shore from the brink
Only to leave me in the shallow waters
Now your memories keep me floating
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