Hey, Lele here for a review
Just want to start by saying this is categorized in the wrong section
Moments like these are far from dramatic. And I feel for you
I don’t get a hint of glorification from your words. Only empathy.
This poem is full of emotion. It is very real. It is bittersweet. From such dark emotions to seemingly positive. You can feel the frantic nature of your words. I would love for you to elaborate more on what victory is and what it means to you in this piece.
Overall, it is beautiful. Very telling. I hope for your peace of mind. Keep writing
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