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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical
    Re: Home ¿

    Hello, hope all is well. Here for a review. First off, I enjoy the way you wrote this poem. From the first to the second stanza, you differentiate the moods ...

    Jun 6, 2023

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Health
    Re: Why go home

    Hello, hope all is well. Here for a review. Wow. First let me say that this is an emotionally raw poem. You can feel the pain. You can feel the ...

    Jun 6, 2023

  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic
    Re: Questioning

    Hello, hope all is well. Here for a review First, I wanna say that I appreciate you taking the time to write this piece as I'm sure it means a ...

    Jun 6, 2023

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative
    Re: Two-faced

    Hello, hope all is well. Here with a review and should I say, I truly enjoyed this poem The distinct comparisons between the personalities were described very well. I loved ...

    Jun 6, 2023

  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, General
    Re: Spectators

    Hey, hope all is well. I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. The imagery you used to describe the setting is very nice. I can feel how hot the weather is. A ...

    Jun 6, 2023

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic
    Re: i've gotten worse // since we last spoke

    Hey, Lele here for a review Just wanted to say that this was good piece. It felt more like a conversation than a poem. It’s good. Feels natural, doesn’t feel ...

    Dec 7, 2021

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: The Candle Melting

    Hey, Lele here to review Just wanted to start by saying this is a beautiful poem I love the imagery, simple but effective. The mirrored perspectives of young and old ...

    Dec 7, 2021

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: Victory, mine

    Hey, Lele here for a review Just want to start by saying this is categorized in the wrong section Moments like these are far from dramatic. And I feel for ...

    Dec 7, 2021

  • Poetry » Realistic, General
    Re: Curiosity

    Hey, Lele here for a review Just wanted to start by saying this was a fun poem to read. Quirky and funny. It feels like a story book narrator were ...

    Dec 7, 2021

  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic
    Re: Her everything

    Hey, Lele here to review Just wanted to start by saying this was a good poem Because of how you prefaced with the disclaimer, it gave a different perspective of ...

    Dec 7, 2021

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Mother Earth

    Hey, Lele here for a review Wanted to start off by saying this was amazing Loved the progression of the poem. Short, sweet, to the point. Each season was described ...

    Dec 7, 2021

  • Poetry » Spiritual, General
    Re: Masih

    Hey, Lele here for a review Just wanted to start off and say the decorative accents are beautiful. Helps the poem pop. An immediate attention grabber. This poem feels so ...

    Dec 7, 2021

  • Poetry » Realistic, Fantasy
    Re: my childish magic

    This poem has such a good lighthearted feel to it. The description for this poem really set it off for me because I feel joy for small wonders I find ...

    Feb 12, 2018

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: shoreline

    I enjoyed reading this poem. It had a very nice flow. This line in particular intrigued me the most: "we're a religion dedicated to aftermaths..." This really hit home because ...

    Feb 12, 2018

  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic
    Re: Regret

    As short of a story as this is, it was pretty good. I only wish that you could’ve went in more detail about the feelings of regret. But then again, ...

    Feb 12, 2018


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