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Hi!!! I really liked this poem because it fallows topic really well. I just thought that you might want to put in some punctuation so that the reader knows which ...

I feel like literally every girl has done that at some point, and I 'm not going to lie, I do that too. I wish that I was prettier and ...

Wow! So dramatic! So wounderfull! I can't belive that I have ever lived without this poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I have never read a finer pieced of literature!!!!!!!!!!! Well

It is alright, but you are missing; Capitalization, Interest, Meaning. This is more of a child poem than something an adult would like, and it sounds like some thing a ...

Ireally enjoyed it, but there are some things. 'Here water flowed over black slimy rocks, bright flowers grew in the wet soil on the banks. Three dear stood by the ...

'The moon, so small, it breaks night after night, losing pieces to the unknown thieves of the night,' I really liked that line in particular. This is extremely amazing for ...

I really liked this poem, but it seems kind of foggy. What I get out of this is someone lost their love and commited suicide. They used to enjoy walking ...

Good poem but God needs to be capitalized also, the lines should be like line... line... So on and so forth. Also, you might want to capitalize I. I is ...

A really good poem but you should keep the hooded ones hooded, not telling anyone that they are witches. And also, how can a squirrel snore like... really? And how ...

I felt it was like we aren't really free no matter what anyone says. Someone always has controll over us. We askfor freedom and they pretend to give it to ...

This is really good, but I feel like the other lines are all over the place. Maybe you should line them up eavenly.

Not bad Annette, but you might want to put a period at the end. Also, the meaning was a bit foggy, so you might want to explain that better. And ...

Not bad, but try not to make it sound like the ten commandments. And try not to be too braggy, or people will get mad at you and you'll be ...

Sexism is wrong and no one should ever be sexist. God did not create a woman for nothing, and he didn't create a man for nothing either. Sexist people sin ...

At some parts this is hard to fallow, and the message is buried deep, deep down, but it is apparent. In the author's mind christianity is best, but they will ...