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  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: the perfect student

    hi. this is kman134. i'm here to review. This is very relatable because i'm the same. when i study, i become a shut in. i would ignore the people around ...

    Dec 16, 2016
  • Poetry » Supernatural, Mystery / Suspense Re: No Man's Sky

    hi. this is kman134. i'm here to review. this was very beautiful and very mystical. for centuries, mankind had believe the firmament was a barrier between earth and the heavens. ...

    Dec 15, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: her name was ciera.

    Hi. my name is kman134. i'm here to review. the imagery was perfect. it wasn't rushed, nor was it forced into the story. much of it was reminiscent of a ...

    Dec 15, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Cosmos

    hi. this is kman134. i'm here to review. i love this poem. it gives a human interpretation of the cosmos and shows the beauty of the stars. the only problem ...

    Dec 14, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: Warhol's Spectrum

    hi. this is kman134. i'm here to review. this was a little disturbing. it was like being written by jack the ripper. "One day I took my scalpel and painted ...

    Dec 14, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Night Driving

    hi. the is kman134. here to review your work. my favorite part was the middle: "As the lines of cars Pass me in a blur, I trace familiar faces over ...

    Dec 14, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Tell me, My Love

    Hi. this is kman134. i'm here to review. First off, i love this poem. It's just how everyone feels when experiencing a breakup. the feeling when someone tells you that ...

    Dec 14, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: I Hate everything about you

    Hi. This is kman134. i'm here to review. "I hate everything about you You are so empty of emotion You’d jump of that bridge And get caught in the wind." ...

    Dec 9, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Knowing Gods chapter 1 (Edited)

    Hi. This is Kman134. I'm here to review. First off, this was a good first chapter. it gave off that MMORPG, anime vibe many fans love in various animesque stories. ...

    Dec 8, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Doodles

    Hi. I'm Kman134. I'm here to review. I've read the poem and it was okay. You've shown the struggles an artist has when writing. the colors you've mentioned in the ...

    Dec 5, 2016
  • Poetry » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Narcissist

    Hi. This is kman134. i'm here to review. This is good. this is pretty good. The first stanza shows the attitude all narcissists see in others. He/she would see them ...

    Dec 5, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Your Own Universe

    Hi. This is kman134. Here to review your work. A poem about a piano. That's one rare poem because not many people use a piano as a muse. I can ...

    Dec 4, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Science Fiction Re: I'll save you, then the rest of the world.

    Hi. this is kman134 here. I'm here to review your work. I enjoyed the scifi romanticism of the poem. I can see the protagonists' want to save the one person ...

    Nov 30, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Metamorphosis

    Hi. this is kman134 here. i'm going to review your work. The parallelism of caterpillars and humans is indirectly referenced in this poem. Like humans, caterpillars go through puberty. However, ...

    Nov 30, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: begin again.

    Hi. this is Kman134 here. I'm here to review. moving to a new place is painful to adjust. Thinking about your old city Akron will only make it worst. I ...

    Nov 30, 2016


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