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kman134

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Humor Re: In The Hall

    Hi. this is kman134. I am here to review your work. the atmosphere of your poem was dark and ominous. the world in your poem shows visions of blood and ...

    Sep 14, 2018
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Exposed

    Hi. This is kman134. I'm here to review your work. the imagery of abuse and cologne gives off the feeling of dread and fear. people who are in an abusive ...

    Sep 14, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Pain

    hi. this is kman134. I'm here to review your work. when one went through such heartbreak, one would feel like that life is not worth living. you are treated like ...

    Sep 12, 2018
  • Poetry » Horror, Teen Fiction Re: Queen of Death

    Hi. This is Kman134. I'm here to review your work. the assumption of one feeling that they bring death and despair is the ultimate form of depression. In the book ...

    Sep 12, 2018
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: The Last Chapter Of Us

    Hi. This is kman134. I'm here to review your work. This is a really good poem about breakups. they can be hard and take a really long time to get ...

    Sep 7, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Tired

    Hi. This is Kman134. I'm here to review your work. fatigue and insomnia being an obvious theme to the poem is a feeling we all experience. I always wake up ...

    Sep 7, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Air Is Freedom

    Hi. This is Kman134. I'm here to review your work. This was a short and sweet Poem. However, it does emphasize the adrenaline feeling we get when we're in the ...

    Aug 8, 2018
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Clear water and dry salt

    Hi. This is kman134. I'm here to review your poem. I like the way this poem is like a rap song, drawing pain and sorrow while combining imagery and metaphors ...

    Aug 3, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Friends

    Hi. This is kman134. I'm here to review your work. There is nothing worse than unrequited love. you have someone who loves doubt you don't love him/her back. However, you ...

    Jul 31, 2018
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: Rain

    Hi. This is Kman134. I'm here to review your work. I love the rain. I love how it grazes against my skin and would refuse to use an umbrella, only ...

    Jul 29, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: A Writer's Dream

    Hi. This is Kman134. I'm here to review. Although this poem was short, it did contain a meaningful message. Writer's block is something we writer's struggle with. People want us ...

    Jul 29, 2018
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: The caliginous mind

    Hi. This is kman134. I'm here to review your work. Caliginous meaning dark and misty. It is the fear of the unknown and the darkness that creates such a feeling. ...

    Jul 18, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: Departed Yet Still Here

    Hi. This is Kman134. I'm here to review your work. I am sorry for your loss. Your grandmother sounded like a wonderful woman and loved her life without any regret ...

    Jul 18, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: World

    Hi. This is Kman134. I'm here to review your work. I really love how you expressed both the beauty of the world but have also expressed the ugliness of the ...

    Jun 30, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: When will it stop

    Hi. This is Kman134. I'm here to review your work. I like the symbolism of time and recollection in your poem. The way the story presents a sort of existential ...

    Jun 30, 2018


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