klennon14

Hello there, here for a review. Wow! I love this piece! Overall, I feel it reads very smoothly. I would have to agree with the other reviewer below in that ...

Hi there, here for a review! The first few lines about being initiated into the game is well written. It intrigues the reader. "I feel my body disintegrating as I’m ...

Hi there, here for a review, In general, I don't particularly have a taste for rhyming poems. I favor free verse. However, I rather enjoyed the scheme you have created ...

Hello, here for a review, I overall enjoyed this poem and I like the feeling and atmosphere you set forth. I do think there's room for improvement for the ending, ...

Hi there, here for a review. Wow!! I truly love this piece. Your wording was simple yet cutting and I enjoyed how easy this was to read! I honestly have ...

Hello there! What a great piece. Very original and an enjoyable read. I do have a few nitpicks though if you would like to bare with me for a dozen ...

Hi there! I see you're a fairly new member, welcome to YWS!!! :) I am here for a review, and I see this is your first poem. My reviews can ...

Hi there, here for a review! I enjoyed the serene feel to this poem. I like the theme of healing and using balm as a metaphor for love healing you ...

Wow. The word choice and originality here is amazing! I love this piece! You have excellent rhythm and flow. I don't find myself stumbling upon any kinks that need fixing ...

Wow, this poem is quite stunning. You have a fairly nice rhythm and the metaphors are original. I like your word choice and the simplicity. First of all, love the ...

Hi there! Here for quick review. I really enjoyed reading your piece. I think you utilize creative word choice and original lines of thinking in many of these stanzas. However, ...

Hi there! Here to review your piece. First of all, I'd like to start out by saying that I enjoyed reading this. It's relatable but you also throw in some ...

Hi there, I'm here to review your lovely piece :) Let's begin with how much I love the meaning behind this poem. You capture the real and raw feelings of ...

Hi there! Here for a quick review :) Overall, I enjoyed this piece. There's a solid kind of simplicity and beauty to it. Can haikus about nature be predictable? Of ...

Hi there! Here for a review! Let me just start out by saying, I am going through these exact feelings right now, so this poem really hit home for me. ...