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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Desperado

    Hey there! joallover here for a review on this wonderful Review Day for team Mazarine Marauders! I saw the title 'Desperado' and I instantly got the Eagle's song Desperado stuck ...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Literature, Dramatic Re: Curses

    Hey there! joallover here for a review on this wonderful Review Day for team Mazarine Marauders! Woah. I relate to this way more than I should. You perfectly portrayed this ...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Culture, Romantic Re: It Only Takes A Moment

    Hey there! joallover here for a review on this wonderful Review Day for team Mazarine Marauders! I adore this! I wish everybody would read this, it is so true! I ...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Break all our rules.

    Hey there! joallover here for a review on this wonderful Review Day for team Mazarine Marauders! I like the meaning in this piece. There are a few things I can ...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: You Can See Me Against the Farthest Wall

    Hey there! joallover here for a review on this wonderful Review Day for team Mazarine Marauders! I like the experiment here, I probably wouldn't be able to do it this ...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: Fiction

    Hey there! joallover here for a review on this wonderful Review Day for team Mazarine Marauders! I'm in agree with @Temi, this does not feel like a poem to me. ...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Those Overlapping Tales

    Hey there! joallover here for a review on this wonderful Review Day for team Mazarine Marauders! You do like writing about love, don't you? You said it in your description, ...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Shadows

    Hey there! joallover here for a review on this wonderful Review Day for team Mazarine Marauders! This is a very realistic approach to dreadful situations and their memories. People who ...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Dear Pilot

    Hey there! joallover here for a review on this wonderful Review Day for team Mazarine Marauders! I have to say, well done! This almost sounds like a rainy day thought, ...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Romantic Re: Silent Pain

    Hey there! joallover here for a review on this wonderful Review Day for team Mazarine Marauders! So, you have a good thing going here. Just, a few things could make ...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Drowning in Air

    Hey there! joallover here for a review on this wonderful Review Day for team Mazarine Marauders! Well, that was obviously personal, on some level. Extremely, absolutely well written, couldn't make ...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Humor Re: Why I'm called anonymous

    Hey there! joallover here for a review on this wonderful Review Day for team Mazarine Marauders! I have to say, this is good. I do have nitpicks though. " My ...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Other » Lyrical, Realistic Re: That's True Love

    Hey there! joallover here for a review on this wonderful Review Day for team Mazarine Marauders! So I have a few things to say about this. It is well written, ...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Here's to You

    Hey there! joallover here for a review on this wonderful Review Day for team Mazarine Marauders! I like the idea of this. It's sweet and very relevant to the personal ...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Spiritual Re: Mara, called Magdalene

    Hey there! joallover here for a review on this wonderful Review Day for team Mazarine Marauders! Can I just say...oh my goodness. How does this have only one review?! This ...

    Mar 30, 2014


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