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Re: What I believe is true
Hmmm, interesting poem. I reaaally loved the beginning, and how you likened determination to a furnace. And this poem seems like it was written exactly as you saw it in ...
Dec 27, 2013 -
Re: Midnight
First of all, I agree with ConverseFireGirl on two things: 1. That poem was amazing! 2. That poem could have used a couple touch-ups in the grammar department, because the ...
Dec 27, 2013 -
Re: In a Matter of Seconds
Oooo, very original. I never considered writing a poem like this. And I like it! It reminds me a bit of Katniss in the Hunger Games, but maybe that's just ...
Dec 23, 2013 -
Re: Candles-Prologue
Hullo! I really enjoyed the prologue, and could easily see it leading into a high-quality story (or novel, or wherever you decide to take this!). The technicalities are great, the ...
Dec 23, 2013 -
Re: Devastation in Tears
Hmmm, sounds familiar. I really like that this poem seems to describe those moments of self-doubt that everyone experiences sometime in their life, whether you intended that or not. The ...
Dec 23, 2013 -
Re: At the playground.
Just a few thoughts on this poem: Really enjoyed it, which came as a surprise to me after reading the extremely misleading title. The scene feels so real, which is ...
Dec 22, 2013 -
Re: Immortal Discord {Part 1}
Intriguing... First off (before I forget): 1. continant=continent 2. "Finn." Emilia lectured. "You have to focus. = "Finn," Emilia lectured,"You have to focus. 3. "Follow me then," = "Follow me ...
Dec 21, 2013 -
Re: I Am a Shell
I hear what you're saying. Your emotions and voice are strong throughout the poem; even if the poem had no flow, I would like it simply because passion built up ...
Dec 20, 2013 -
Re: Wish
Greetings. And welcome. *glances down at previous review* *sighs* As usual, I'll cut a strait to the case, loop around, have a picnic, and arrive at my point. I am ...
Dec 20, 2013 -
Re: The Garden
Helloo. I'm not quite sure what this poem means, but it certainly feels depressing (in a good way. I think.). If that's what you were aiming for, congrats! I can ...
Dec 19, 2013 -
Re: Sounds are Colors
The fluidity is... refreshing. "when emotion is piled into restless harmonies that swirl into aimless patterns of noise" My favorite lines by far, I can feel blending of harmonic music, ...
Dec 19, 2013 -
Re: Mad Raving Of a Pseudo-God
Heeeey... Mad Pseudo-god. I'll cut strait to the case. I was browsing through a few random poems, and this one caught my eye. The imagery is beautiful throughout the piece, ...
Dec 19, 2013