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Re: diamond horses
Ha! No, she didn't die. She was super upset that her granddaughter dropped her expensive horse figurine, naturally. Thanks for your great review! -ml
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Re: Snow White
This is a wonderful piece. I love it when people twist fairy tales like this. It's simple, but you paint Snow White to be a fierce, self-assured character who has ...
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Re: sister, sister, (2)
I'll be sure to tag you when I write another chapter. Thanks for reading! -ml
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Re: Apprentice to master - Chapter one
Your welcome! -ml
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Re: Leviathan.
oh, i'm so glad it helped!
Nov 4, 2020 -
Re: sister, sister, (1)
Thank you for this review! I will be sure to change the title! My friend suggested it, and I wasn't thinking of the connotations, despite being a POC. AAAAH, SERIOUSLY? ...
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Re: Taming the tea
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Ah. I love this piece so much, especially the last stanza. "Carefully I bring another Sip to my lips My face brightens. The dragons didn't bite me this time, Instead ... -
Re: march on, little soldier.
..that was meant for CyberGenji- but okay, whatevs! ;D
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Re: Don't You Dare
You're welcome. Happy writing! -ml
Nov 4, 2020 -
Re: march on, little soldier.
The stanza you posted was my favorite too, and thank you for your kind words. -ml
Nov 4, 2020 -
Re: march on, little soldier.
Hey! Thanks for reviewing this piece! The lack of capitlization was a stylistic choice that I thought I might try. Thanks again, -ml
Nov 4, 2020 -
Re: That Old, Broken Fence - Prologue
I don't think I can do this piece enough justice to review it. It's just...wow.
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Re: ramblings of a lunatic
"time moves so fast and i move so slow and i feel so rushed and i have no time for anything. i’m running and running and i can’t catch up ...
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Re: Advertisement
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Nov 4, 2020
This totally reminds me/reminiscent of something that would pop up in the Percy Jackson series especially when I read: "Blue fire, harvested from the core of Neptune". It also follows ... -
Re: poignant reminders
AAAAA. I LOVE LOWERCASE POETRY SO MUCH IT'S SO AESTHETICALLY PLEASING. THIS MADE MY HEART SOAR AND BREAK AT THE SAME TIME. THE FLOWER BEING USED METAPHORICALLY NEVER GETS OLD. ...
Nov 4, 2020
