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Re: baked goods in the mirror
As someone who has struggled with restrictive eating, this really hit home. I had spent hours upon hours counting up calories and restricting foods, and it all comes down to ...
Dec 3, 2020 -
Re: Friends with a monster
Ooh, I am a lover of all things macabre, so this was right up my alley. The one thing I really liked about this piece was the way in which ...
Nov 13, 2020 -
Re: serving a life sentence in the name of revenge
I don't exactly know what to say about this, other than I'm in awe?? it's simple, but certainly manages to make a point. This really does give me vibes of ...
Nov 13, 2020 -
Re: The Ultimate Heartbreak
The sense of melancholy and well, heartbreak I get from this piece just tugs at my heartstrings. If this is a true story, I’m so sorry things ended in your ...
Nov 11, 2020 -
Re: Instructions
I didn’t really know what I was getting into when I read the title, but was pleasantly surprised with what I got. The language you use is pretty straightforward, but ...
Nov 11, 2020 -
Re: jumble of life
I liked the bluntness of this piece. You really got to the point that even though life is really, really difficult at time, you must be able to at least ...
Nov 11, 2020 -
Re: New Age
I don't really know what to quite say about this. I'm not sure if this is in reference to today's society, or the past, but I understand what you mean, ...
Nov 8, 2020 -
Re: To Alcohol,
Ya gorl loves a poem without flowery language. This feels really true, and raw. I don't know if you're writing from the perspective of a person that is an alcoholic, ...
Nov 7, 2020 -
Re: maybe I'm a fish that needs to learn to fly.
I wasn't really sure what to make of this poem and it's subject. After a few-read throughs, I really got the gist of it. It's about choosing your own destiny ...
Nov 7, 2020 -
Re: i found my true love in a youtube ad
The complexiTY in thiS piECE is amazing. I'm just in awe of the sentence structure, the spelling, everything is just..the epitome of writing. The squiggles of red add just a ...
Nov 7, 2020 -
Re: On Wings of Fire: Chapter 1, Part 1
I haven't read the Wings of Fire series, but I love dragons, which is partly the reason I clicked on this. Your OCs (or at least I'm assuming they're your ...
Nov 6, 2020 -
Re: The End
Okay, let me just start off with how I interpreted this. The language you used made me think that this person was being silenced/emotionally abused in a relationship with their ...
Nov 6, 2020 -
Re: earl grey
Again, I love your poetry. I know this is sort of a minute detail, but I loved the way you formatted the first stanza. (specifically the onomatapaeia'd words). I think ...
Nov 6, 2020 -
Re: love me like i love the moon
Okay, so these are all really simple, in the use of words, syllables, etc. I really, really like that, especially since not a lot of poetry is like this. A ...
Nov 6, 2020 -
Re: I languish all the tide.
I think this is a really vibrant poem. I love the imagery you've managed to insert with different landscapes. My favorite line was "My dreams are stars covered by clouds ...
Nov 5, 2020
