itsLayal

i liked your poem a lot but I don't understand this "Will everything be the same if ever you are here with me?" The "ever" isn't really making sense so ...

I liked it but i kind of felt like it wasn't complete. I wanted it to be longer because it was really good, i think if it was longer it ...

Wow! oh my god this song deserves a lot of attention. It pretty much a description of my whole life, it's really relatable and amazing! i loved this part : ...

I love how you write with great passion. I think it would improve if you added a third verse, you might not want to add one but I'm just saying ...

I loved your poem but i think it would have been better if it was longer by adding more details and feelings. No grammar mistakes or spelling, and perfectly written. ...

Wow!! That's really good. i loved how it starts out as hopeless and heart-breaking and then you kind of prove how its not all bad and you'll get through it. ...

I really liked your poem. It kind of leaves the reader to think about it anyway they want to. I know thats the point of the whole thing but it ...

Great poem! While reading the last part you just kind of expect that they would die but the exact opposite happens. I guess that's how life goes, you expect things ...

Its a really amazing. These are the kind of thoughts we think of everyday and you put it into a perfectly written poem! There's one thing to improve , i ...

The poem sheds light on a real issue and it proves a truly meaningful idea. I think it would have been more dramatic if you added more details, but other ...

Just Amazing! It's so true,this poem shows how words can build a human up or tear them down and that's so accurate. You expressed it in a great way i ...

I loved it because its the kind of poem that everyone can relate to. I liked how you made it really personal and at the same time relatable. The last ...

Most of the things i wanted to say were already mentioned in previous comments or reviews. I really loved you're poem , it's pretty relatable and different. I loved the ...

i have to admit that the poem is pretty heart -breaking, you have a great way to express it. I loved the part where its like "Every word you say ...

I really likes your poem because you are trying to shed light on a subject ignored by society. Bullying should be noticed and stopped. Your poem has a great purpose, ...