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I found this poem very easy to relate too. I like how you used the word "vacant". It was a really good way to explain the sentence. I am not into poetry but I really like this poem. I also like the way you used "thriving". I don't see that word often. This is a really good poem! :*
Hi glovegg!
I'm Hanorah and I'm here to review your poem today.
First of all,just Wow.I can really relate to this poem,and I normally find that quite hard to do.
I liked how it was quite simple,easy to understand,no over complicating anything.
I don't think there is any spelling or grammar mistakes,so well done.my favourite line was
'Perhaps I'll never be fixed..
I'm broken for life'
I would give that a 10/10,well done!
And keep writing!
Gracious, so unbelievably much!!
Your poem is definitely different than what I expected from the title. I love poems, stories, etc that have that effect, it just interests me more. I really like how you brought up one topic, made it seem discouraging yet changed the mood and turned it to something way more different than what can be imagined. I also like the last couplet where you stated how designing your own world is exciting and I totally agree with you. Great job, I really loved your poem!
Awesome, thank you very much! Readers are what keep me writing! So gracious!!
I really loved your poem! I think the way you broke it down was very well. Your style is really to the point and very simple, yet it implies the main message very well. If there's anything you can do to make the poem even better is adding some more detail to give it more of a feel. Even using a little of imagery can really make this poem even better! Overall you did great!
Gracious!! I love all the advice I can get!! And, please don't think of this as a standard thank you. I truly mean every thanks that I give.
I loved your poem but i think it would have been better if it was longer by adding more details and feelings.
No grammar mistakes or spelling, and perfectly written. You have a nice style in writing.
I like the part where its like
"No one drove the pencil
in my hand.
Yet not one person has
discouraged it."
I love it, keep it up!
I would like to add some more into it, I just might. THANK YOU.
This poem is amazing! I really like it! I hope you write more glove!
Is a good point that being yourself is the best thing, people will appreciate you more. People will also like your own opinions, not to let the majority plant it on you.
"Music.. my thriving point.
The ground, my swivel chair.
Perhaps the trees that stand tall
will one day become a character."
It is the best thing creat your own world, don't get too attached to it, though. There's always something called reality, too. That's why you have to be careful of how far you take your imagination.
"Isn't it fun to design your own world?
To create something entirely your own?
I don't know about you...
Sounds pretty exciting to me. : )"
It is great, I love it! Keep writing!
Keep up the good work!
Gracious!! <3