Young Writers Society

I love how you write with great passion.

I think it would improve if you added a third verse, you might not want to add one but I'm just saying my personal opinion.

I really liked the way your chorus describes how love is something that carries you away.

Described beautifully and great style.

Hey LosCadaver! First of all, dreaming is one of my favorite things to write or discuss about, so I can immediately say that you wrote amazing lyrics. There's so much feeling flowing through your lines. Also, if you want to check my song called "Dreamkeeper". It's on my profile, so take a look at it if you catch some free time, you'll see it's very similar. I'd like to read or hear a lot more from you, keep writing .

~Bard

Hi! I just would like to say that this is a good song. I think it's simple in a cute way, the lyrics have a dreamy feeling into them.

I think it would be cool to listen to. Keep writing!

Hello, I would like to make a review on your lyrics.
I enjoyed the rhyme scheme in the lyrics. It also didn't take up the entire thing which is good.
Personally I did enjoy it, and when I was reading it I had a singing voice in my head.
Overall I enjoyed your lyrics.
-Jack