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Re: Elsa (Frozen) & Jack Frost Fanfiction Part 1
Hey SilentBagpipe, You are a tremendous writer, as I had also mentioned earlier. This piece of writing clearly boasts of your avid imagination and honed writing skills, remarkable for your ...
May 30, 2015 -
Re: Blame.
Hey, This is an absolutely lovely piece of writing. Some poems aspire to be great by the virtue of their writing, some by the usage of words, some by presentation. ...
May 29, 2015 -
Re: I'm Like This Mug.
Hey Hanna, I can't begin to type how much I love this piece of writing. I mean, it is fabulous. Absolutely WOW. When normal people read something they like, it ...
May 29, 2015 -
Re: I promise, my darling
Hey Bball41, I like that you've kept this poem short and sweet. It is a waterfall of emotions to the person it is dedicated to. Since it is not for ...
May 29, 2015 -
Re: Her Boss | Unedited
Hey ArtStyx, First of all, let me tell you that I love his story that you've written. I admire your writing style and this piece really inspired the writer inside ...
May 29, 2015 -
Re: Memory Train
Hey, This is a spectacular piece and I was on the brink of tears towards the end :') The way you brought out this story in your poem is great. ...
May 22, 2015 -
Re: Hate/Love
Hey, Welcome to YWS :) To start with, I must say that I really like this poem. The theme you chose is unique from what I usually read of love ...
May 22, 2015 -
Re: Serendipity Life #1
Hey, Firstly, let me tell you that I really like your writing style. The way you've brought out the theme of family separation, illness and love altogether in one is ...
May 22, 2015 -
Re: The Tower
Hey, You've written a great story :') I was moved to tears by the end of it. And your writing is flawless. Even after two readings, I couldn't find a ...
May 21, 2015 -
Re: Revenge
Hey, I must say you've written a great plot. But you've typed it in haste. A little editing here and there would make it bang on. Some typos that you ...
May 21, 2015 -
Re: Chapter 1 - The Firestone Tower
Hey Zen I think this is a great plot in making and I'm eagerly waiting for more chapters to follow! Some of the typos/errors I noticed: "Each night,I burn the ...
May 21, 2015 -
Re: Dreams
Heyy. I absolutely love this poem. You have great writing skills. It is eminent from the way you review and help other people. Your own writings are so perfect! After ...
May 21, 2015 -
Re: What I Could Write?
This is a brilliant piece. Precisely highlights the struggles of a writer and the cynicism they have to face. I really loved this: "They would spook me and haunt my ...
May 21, 2015 -
Re: Demons Aren't Evil
Bravo! I love reading fantasy fiction and this is one of the best I've read over her. For the review , I would just like to point out some sentences ...
May 20, 2015 -
Re: loosely
Hey. I really like this poem. The title doesn't give even the slightest hint about the theme and that's what drew me towards reading it. I really like the fact ...
May 20, 2015
