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  • Poetry » General, General Re: I called it drowning

    Hi, This is a simple, crisp and effective poem. It puts the message across really well and one can understand the tone and theme. I just think it could be ...

    Apr 9, 2017
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: Before I Fall

    Hey. I have been inactive here for a long time and today when I decided to sit and review something, I am GLAD this is the first piece I stumbled ...

    Mar 18, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: my hand is falling asleep on a bed of pins and needles

    Hey So I started reading this poem and at first I thought it was about depression, then I thought that maybe it's about self harm and suicidal thoughts and by ...

    Jul 24, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: The Heavy Heart of a Friend

    Hey alliyah Before starting with the review, I would just want you to know that I absolutely loved this poem. I have been on both the sides. I have had ...

    Jul 18, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Don't Mourn A Living Person

    Hey I really loved this concept of conveying unexpressed thoughts with strikeouts! For me those striked out lines are messages I type but end up backspacing while the ones I ...

    Jul 18, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Fantasy Re: If I Were You...

    Hey I really like the theme of your poem. It's simple yet impactful. So I will start with some things that I feel could make this poem better. 1. I ...

    Jul 16, 2016
  • Other » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Sleepless

    Hey CateRose17, I really love this narrative. I was on a cliff till the end. The suspense and intrigue you created was amazing. Also, your descriptive abilities are really good. ...

    Jul 12, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: i don't usually write happy poems

    Hey, Firstly, I would say this is a brilliant piece of writing. The flow is neat and magical. I always love this style of writing. You have beautifully illustrated how ...

    May 26, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Wish

    Hey, I started reading your poem to review it. But after reading it I just cannot review it. Seldom does it happen that one gets so engrossed in a poem ...

    May 26, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: The Ditcher

    Hey SINGHAM, This is a really nice poem. It is something that grabs the reader's interest till the last line discloses the ditcher. With every line I was guessing a ...

    Oct 10, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Bottle

    Hey tintomara138, Bravo! This is one hell of a poem. I don't know what to say. Most of the people over here talk about grammar, punctuation and vocabulary while reviewing. ...

    Oct 10, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Mr Teddy

    Hey ticktock123, I really enjoyed reading this poem of yours. I always have a problem in rhyming my poems. So when I read a well rhymed and phrased poem it ...

    Oct 10, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Rain helps to hide the tears

    Hey emmawordsmith, This was a terrific story! I really like the fact that it started without any background and ended before any such conclusion. Such stories provoke imagination in the ...

    Jul 14, 2015
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Realistic Re: The Statues Are Weeping

    Hey TheShauzer, I really really loved your poem. Mostly because it wasn't so direct and spoon-fed to the reader. I like those poems where I have to read more than ...

    Jul 8, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Black cherries

    Hey shaon, I really liked your poem. It was interesting to read. What I loved the most were the comparisons and descriptions moulded in beautiful words! I didn't quite understand ...

    Jul 8, 2015


You can't blame the writer for what the characters say.
— Truman Capote