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  • Poetry » General, General Re: I called it drowning

    Hi, This is a simple, crisp and effective poem. It puts the message across really well and one can understand the tone and theme. I just think it could be ...

    Apr 9, 2017
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: Before I Fall

    Hey. I have been inactive here for a long time and today when I decided to sit and review something, I am GLAD this is the first piece I stumbled ...

    Mar 18, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: my hand is falling asleep on a bed of pins and needles

    Hey So I started reading this poem and at first I thought it was about depression, then I thought that maybe it's about self harm and suicidal thoughts and by ...

    Jul 24, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: The Heavy Heart of a Friend

    Hey alliyah Before starting with the review, I would just want you to know that I absolutely loved this poem. I have been on both the sides. I have had ...

    Jul 18, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Don't Mourn A Living Person

    Hey I really loved this concept of conveying unexpressed thoughts with strikeouts! For me those striked out lines are messages I type but end up backspacing while the ones I ...

    Jul 18, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Fantasy Re: If I Were You...

    Hey I really like the theme of your poem. It's simple yet impactful. So I will start with some things that I feel could make this poem better. 1. I ...

    Jul 16, 2016
  • Other » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Sleepless

    Hey CateRose17, I really love this narrative. I was on a cliff till the end. The suspense and intrigue you created was amazing. Also, your descriptive abilities are really good. ...

    Jul 12, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: i don't usually write happy poems

    Hey, Firstly, I would say this is a brilliant piece of writing. The flow is neat and magical. I always love this style of writing. You have beautifully illustrated how ...

    May 26, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Wish

    Hey, I started reading your poem to review it. But after reading it I just cannot review it. Seldom does it happen that one gets so engrossed in a poem ...

    May 26, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: The Ditcher

    Hey SINGHAM, This is a really nice poem. It is something that grabs the reader's interest till the last line discloses the ditcher. With every line I was guessing a ...

    Oct 10, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Bottle

    Hey tintomara138, Bravo! This is one hell of a poem. I don't know what to say. Most of the people over here talk about grammar, punctuation and vocabulary while reviewing. ...

    Oct 10, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Mr Teddy

    Hey ticktock123, I really enjoyed reading this poem of yours. I always have a problem in rhyming my poems. So when I read a well rhymed and phrased poem it ...

    Oct 10, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Rain helps to hide the tears

    Hey emmawordsmith, This was a terrific story! I really like the fact that it started without any background and ended before any such conclusion. Such stories provoke imagination in the ...

    Jul 14, 2015
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Realistic Re: The Statues Are Weeping

    Hey TheShauzer, I really really loved your poem. Mostly because it wasn't so direct and spoon-fed to the reader. I like those poems where I have to read more than ...

    Jul 8, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Black cherries

    Hey shaon, I really liked your poem. It was interesting to read. What I loved the most were the comparisons and descriptions moulded in beautiful words! I didn't quite understand ...

    Jul 8, 2015


An arrow can only be shot by pulling it backwards. So when life is dragging you back with difficulties, it means that life's going to launch you into something great, so just focus and keep aiming.
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