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Re: I called it drowning
Hi, This is a simple, crisp and effective poem. It puts the message across really well and one can understand the tone and theme. I just think it could be ...
Apr 9, 2017 -
Re: Before I Fall
Hey. I have been inactive here for a long time and today when I decided to sit and review something, I am GLAD this is the first piece I stumbled ...
Mar 18, 2017 -
Re: my hand is falling asleep on a bed of pins and needles
Hey So I started reading this poem and at first I thought it was about depression, then I thought that maybe it's about self harm and suicidal thoughts and by ...
Jul 24, 2016 -
Re: The Heavy Heart of a Friend
Hey alliyah Before starting with the review, I would just want you to know that I absolutely loved this poem. I have been on both the sides. I have had ...
Jul 18, 2016 -
Re: Don't Mourn A Living Person
Hey I really loved this concept of conveying unexpressed thoughts with strikeouts! For me those striked out lines are messages I type but end up backspacing while the ones I ...
Jul 18, 2016 -
Re: If I Were You...
Hey I really like the theme of your poem. It's simple yet impactful. So I will start with some things that I feel could make this poem better. 1. I ...
Jul 16, 2016 -
Re: Sleepless
Hey CateRose17, I really love this narrative. I was on a cliff till the end. The suspense and intrigue you created was amazing. Also, your descriptive abilities are really good. ...
Jul 12, 2016 -
Re: i don't usually write happy poems
Hey, Firstly, I would say this is a brilliant piece of writing. The flow is neat and magical. I always love this style of writing. You have beautifully illustrated how ...
May 26, 2016 -
Re: Wish
Hey, I started reading your poem to review it. But after reading it I just cannot review it. Seldom does it happen that one gets so engrossed in a poem ...
May 26, 2016 -
Re: The Ditcher
Hey SINGHAM, This is a really nice poem. It is something that grabs the reader's interest till the last line discloses the ditcher. With every line I was guessing a ...
Oct 10, 2015 -
Re: The Bottle
Hey tintomara138, Bravo! This is one hell of a poem. I don't know what to say. Most of the people over here talk about grammar, punctuation and vocabulary while reviewing. ...
Oct 10, 2015 -
Re: Mr Teddy
Hey ticktock123, I really enjoyed reading this poem of yours. I always have a problem in rhyming my poems. So when I read a well rhymed and phrased poem it ...
Oct 10, 2015 -
Re: Rain helps to hide the tears
Hey emmawordsmith, This was a terrific story! I really like the fact that it started without any background and ended before any such conclusion. Such stories provoke imagination in the ...
Jul 14, 2015 -
Re: The Statues Are Weeping
Hey TheShauzer, I really really loved your poem. Mostly because it wasn't so direct and spoon-fed to the reader. I like those poems where I have to read more than ...
Jul 8, 2015 -
Re: Black cherries
Hey shaon, I really liked your poem. It was interesting to read. What I loved the most were the comparisons and descriptions moulded in beautiful words! I didn't quite understand ...
Jul 8, 2015
