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I like this poem and the way that you have described yourself in a blunt and instructive manner, the physical and characteristical factors of your identity. Additionally, starting each line ...

This was a very well written article and it seems like it has been cut out right from the newspaper. I love the way that you have delved into his ...

I love the creative style of this poem and the concept of positive and negative. It shows the narrator's line of thought as they think of the theme of addiction ...

This was so well-thought-out and you have captured that atmosphere of an urban legend terrifically. Even the characters too. It has a gothic kind of atmosphere and the touches of ...

This sent chills down my spine, because I cannot tell you how much I agree with you, and you've also put this in a very beautiful story about two people ...

You have done an amazing job on this, and you have a very nice writing style. It seems like you were born to be a writer from what happened to ...

I really liked reading this, it was very off-beat and the style of it is done in a very creative and simple way, however, the meaning behind the story means ...

Wow, this was really controversial and interesting, but brilliant. I love the patchy way that it is written- it really shows how absurd life is. My favourite bit was: You ...

This poem tells a really beautiful story that rises and falls with each verse. It's specked with human experience and all the human emotions that a person can feel: anger, ...

I loved your writing style in this piece, you've done really well with this story. The descriptions, imagery, just like the last reviewer said. You have effectively balanced emotion and ...

This was a very deep chapter, just like Honora stated. I felt like it holds a lot of foreshadowing for the future. When Kai fought with that man at the ...

This was a really direct piece that forces the audience to ask a lot of questions about themselves. You should totally write this down in a short story with those ...

I enjoyed this read since it reminds me of rebirth and freedom as she hatches and sees the new light of the world. I also loved the last two lines: ...

I like the constant structure of this poem, it's very fluent to read and it flows effectively. It reminds me of a dystopian fiction movie where people have to blend ...

I like this poem because it gives love an angle if it were modern times and in modern ways. Their phones were taken and there was no transportation. And the ...