illy7896

This poem is so eloquent and elegant. Not only did I love the rhyming and structure, but I also added the message behind the poem from a seemingly simple thing ...

Wowee, I haven't done a review in ages but I must! Firstly, only in these short sentences, I already have a feel of the story and a foundation of a ...

Something about this piece is very addictive to read. The way that you have described your town was done in such a manner that you seem to skim across the ...

I liked the format of these two poems and your rhyming is very keen and corresponding with each line: Pages, made through sifting ages this line really brought together the ...

I love this poem because it represents how technology and the internet can be used as a friend and a helper but also as a weapon. It also shows how ...

I love the imagery in this poem and the delicate feeling of dewdrops that you have represented in your writing. The line Shaking the deep morning crystals Like dimond windchimes. ...

This poem made me feel like I was in your situation. Something about the rhythm and the line Blow smoke in my face really makes me feel like I am ...

I love this poem because it has such a metaphorical meaning, and it shows how there are so many liars and cheats in the world who jump the hard work ...

Both of these poems are really beautiful and like the reviewer, before I said, the second one was really emotional. Firstly, I loved the questions that are written in the ...

The rhyming scheme in this poem is really effective and tidy whilst also keeping a simple tune to it. It easily conveys the emotions and events in the poem with ...

Firstly, I admire that you have put this out there because I feel like too many people suffer from depression- escepcially in a world and society like this where voices ...

I like the way that you have used manipulation and negative associations, toxic friendships and resembled them in the shape of nature and the relationship that man has with it. ...

The sarcasm in this poem and the anger inside of it is truly profound. This line really hit me now I want to bleed as you dissect me, you refuse ...

As soon as I saw this, I could totally relate. It adds a sense of confusion, hysteria to things that you can't control. You can't understand what these things are ...

This was really profound and the way you have illustrated the sensation of being lost and alone in a busy world ( that's my interpretation) is fantastic. My favourite bit ...