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First of all I love the mystery that surrounds this poem as it conveys the duplicity of human nature, which I always love exploring. The use of juxtaposition with “goodness” ...

How detailed this is! It's so rich in texture: there are so many thoughts, themes and ideas running through here and the vocabulary is great. It can be confusing at ...

This is so heart-breaking, and relatable to those even if they aren't in the same situation. I don't come from a family who's rich or evolves their lives around gold, ...

Hiya! First of all I love the sentence variety, there are so many short sentences to create effect and longer ones to add vivid description. Even though the story is ...

Firstly, I really like the way you have linked the theme of the poem together and the repetition of 'I' and 'she' which tethers the connection between the narrator and ...

Firstly, I love the theme of personal space and the need of perfection and control in your own life or at least thats how I have interpreted it. The stress ...

I don't have any complaints with this poem, in my opinion it captures what it is to live and experience somebody else's life whilst experiencing your own. Starting with the ...

Firstly, I thought that this poem was a great reflective piece on our existence and even the insecurity of the path you are walking and being unsure if you will ...

Why did this spark something inside of me that I can't explain? Well, because it was marvellous! I don't understand why this wasn't reviewed before because this just got me ...

I loved this! The rhyming structure was amazing and how you've included it makes it really engaging, catchy and it makes sense as well. And the topic of overall discrimination ...

Firstly, I love the fairly simple but very effective rhyming scheme that you have applied here and how each verse ties up together and each line corresponds with the other. ...

I'm so glad that you confronted this issue because I feel as if it is not talked about enough today. Although women are given rights, equality and justice in the ...

I love the formatting of your poem since it urges the audience to carry on reading. I also loved the repetition of 'don't' because it gives the impression that the ...

This was a really sweet poem with a really sweet ending to it as well. The last two lines were so beautiful in the way that they were not only ...

I loved the style of this poem and the imagery that you have included. It seems to be a generalisation of youth and opportunity, however, it delves into so much ...