hunith

hi there, ====== this work is fairly clean and simple. i think you really do have some skill in poetry - it could be bettered though. i loved some of ...

Hi Hunith here ========== Heads up: This REVIEW may sound Harsh. i'm going to assume this is your first work since i don't see any link in your clipboard( i ...

Hey, Hunith here =========== first of all, i like your poem. it's simplicity is splendid. but here's one thing i think you should look at. Here: For how long must ...

Hi there's nothing much to say about this work. There's one compliment though: Your work has a timeless feel to it. Personally, i know you were talking about something else. ...

Hunith here for a short review =================== i liked the introduction of this chapter; simple and straightforward. i think your writing is good but you can always improve. look at ...

Hi Hunith here. wow!. WOW! this is an amazing story.. it really moved me personally. I find it very interesting how the two worlds instantly changes for the Dusa. Initially ...

hi Hunith here. This piece of work was well written. i wouldn't say it is perfect, i would say it has good content. i don't really have much against this ...

Hi, hunith here for a review. ================== first of, i must say, i loved reading your writing, t'was well framed. i don't have much to say about the writing, just ...

Hi, Hunith here at last. sorry for the immensely delayed review. was caught up in much work. Well as usual, lets get to business. I truly liked this particular episode. ...

Hey, Hunith here. Good job on submitting the latest chapter. Lets jump to business. i'm gonna start with spellings and mistakes. “He asked you a question,” said Melville loudly who ...

Hey, Hunith here at last. This chapter was long and dry - matter of fact. You must never, let those two happen. If your work is long, it must possess ...

HI. Hunith here. I must say, your writing has greatly improved since the last time i checked. There isn't much i would say about this piece. However lets check this. ...

Hi fortnight, hunith here. First of i must say, your first paragraph was a bit too wordy. I also felt the ceremony ( which was the heart of this chapter ...

Hi, Hunith here finally. Lets Get Down To Business. The sun was about to rise when Sherlock had gotten up. He was excited to discover the secret spot he and ...

hi hunith here. I really like the simplicity of this work. However, it lacked punctuation which could have really stirred a bit of emotion into it. your presentation wasn't the ...