hermione315

Hello! Hermione here for a review! Overall, your story sounds pretty interesting so far. Especially the thing about Bonnie's sister getting married. I think that's going to be interesting to ...

Haha, this poem was great! I especially liked your last two lines, when your speaker uses another cliche without meaning to. Your poem was very enjoyable, but one thing that ...

I completely agree with the review before mine. This poem had a very good message behind it, and I enjoyed it thoroughly, but I thought it kind of flowed weird ...

This is the first chapter of your story that I've been able to read, and it made me want to go back through and read the whole thing. It was ...

This poem is heart breaking. *sobs in a corner* The thing that stuck out to me the most that you wrote was the mother not being able to remember how ...

I LOVED the alliteration in your title. It was so fun to read, and rolled well off the tongue. While I personally would not normally read a poem about birds, ...

This was a very sad and beautiful poem. Short and sweet. Well, bittersweet. There was just a couple small (easily fixable) errors I noticed. "One year later, in the same ...

This is very beautiful and realistic, the best work of literature I've seen written about the Nazi's in World War Two by far. You brought out the point that not ...

Amen! I agree with everything you wrote. There is such a wonderful and true message to this poem, one that many people need to hear, and thank you for being ...

Your poem was really creepy. It gave me the jeepers. At first I thought that this was going to be a sad poem about an abused girl and a guy ...

Hello! This was a very lovely story, and I found myself yearning to know how it would end. Would he continue to be noticed, and eventually, do things to make ...

Hello! Was your poem a spin off of the classic quote that says, "When words fail, music speaks?" That's what I was constantly alluded to. My favorite part of your ...

Hello :) Your poem is quite beautiful. I found myself have to look up the word juxtapose, and once I figured out that it was, in fact, a word, I ...

Thank you for writing this poem that so perfectly describes me and my problem with speaking. People always ask why I don't talk very much, and you summed it up ...

I was definitely drawn in to reading your poem by your title. Smoke and Mirrors. It made me think of a magician! An illusionist! And the person your poem speaks ...