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Re: Two Worlds in One Home
Hello! Hermione here for a short review. I like this poem's message. It really shows the two main outlooks people have concerning the earth. Some are for progress, and some ...
Jul 6, 2015 -
Re: The Chalice of Life: Chapter 1
Hello! Hermione here as requested! This story was a lot like Harry Potter. And I love Harry Potter so I’m sure I’m going to continue reading this book you’re making. ...
Jul 6, 2015 -
Re: Ordadus- Chapter Six (Part Two)
Hi! Hermione here for a review! This is the first of your chapters I've stumbled upon, and since it was so interesting, I had to go back through and read ...
Jul 2, 2015 -
Re: Dangerous Creatures
Hi! Hermione here as requested! I really liked this retelling of Little Red Riding Hood. You used high level vocabulary eloquently throughout the story, and you were able to paint ...
Jun 29, 2015 -
Re: Change
Hi! Hermione here for a review! I really enjoyed how this poem was simple, while at the same time carrying a powerful message. Using almost as few words as possible, ...
Jun 26, 2015 -
Re: My Secret Love
Hi! Hermione here for a review. I enjoyed this poem and the sense of helplessness and desperation that you expressed when it comes to person that secretly loves someone they ...
Jun 10, 2015 -
Re: If on a cold night in Paris
This was the most beautiful and realistic sounding depiction of Paris I have ever read. I was pleasantly surprised when your poem didn't take the usual turn towards the cheesy ...
Jun 3, 2015 -
Re: II. petrichor
Thanks for teaching me a new word! Petrichor...I had to google it. Anyways, I loved your poem because reading it was like a refreshing wave of hope and peacefulness washing ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: Leaving Home
Wow. This was a simply worded yet still very poignant and powerful poem. Even though it's still several years off, I'm already dreading the day that I have to leave ...
May 26, 2015 -
Re: I Notice.
Hi! Hermione here for a review! I (probably along with many other people) was able to relate to this poem a lot. I hate that feeling of despair that comes ...
May 26, 2015 -
Re: Embrace
Hi Bball41! This poem was good and the ending was heart-rending. I wasn't expecting the person to die, but it was a good and powerful touch to the end of ...
May 25, 2015 -
Re: Her
Hi! Hermione here for a review! I have read the book that this poem is talking about by Laurie Halse Anderson, and I agree with you, it's amazing. This poem ...
May 17, 2015 -
Re: We are writers. We are dreamers.
Hi! Hermione here for a review! I see that you're fairly new here, so welcome, and great job on this poem! It was very lovely and relatable, and I enjoyed ...
May 12, 2015 -
Re: Heart of Glass
Hi! Hermione here for a review. You did a wonderful job on this poem; it was beautiful. I only noticed a couple places where it seemed to not flow very ...
May 8, 2015 -
Re: Limerence (Edited)
This is very heartfelt poem yet you managed to word it seemingly effortlessly with simplicity. I enjoyed it a lot and could relate to some of the emotions you expressed. ...
May 6, 2015
