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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Two Worlds in One Home

    Hello! Hermione here for a short review. I like this poem's message. It really shows the two main outlooks people have concerning the earth. Some are for progress, and some ...

    Jul 6, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Chalice of Life: Chapter 1

    Hello! Hermione here as requested! This story was a lot like Harry Potter. And I love Harry Potter so I’m sure I’m going to continue reading this book you’re making. ...

    Jul 6, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Ordadus- Chapter Six (Part Two)

    Hi! Hermione here for a review! This is the first of your chapters I've stumbled upon, and since it was so interesting, I had to go back through and read ...

    Jul 2, 2015
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Dangerous Creatures

    Hi! Hermione here as requested! I really liked this retelling of Little Red Riding Hood. You used high level vocabulary eloquently throughout the story, and you were able to paint ...

    Jun 29, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Change

    Hi! Hermione here for a review! I really enjoyed how this poem was simple, while at the same time carrying a powerful message. Using almost as few words as possible, ...

    Jun 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: My Secret Love

    Hi! Hermione here for a review. I enjoyed this poem and the sense of helplessness and desperation that you expressed when it comes to person that secretly loves someone they ...

    Jun 10, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: If on a cold night in Paris

    This was the most beautiful and realistic sounding depiction of Paris I have ever read. I was pleasantly surprised when your poem didn't take the usual turn towards the cheesy ...

    Jun 3, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: II. petrichor

    Thanks for teaching me a new word! Petrichor...I had to google it. Anyways, I loved your poem because reading it was like a refreshing wave of hope and peacefulness washing ...

    May 31, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Leaving Home

    Wow. This was a simply worded yet still very poignant and powerful poem. Even though it's still several years off, I'm already dreading the day that I have to leave ...

    May 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: I Notice.

    Hi! Hermione here for a review! I (probably along with many other people) was able to relate to this poem a lot. I hate that feeling of despair that comes ...

    May 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Embrace

    Hi Bball41! This poem was good and the ending was heart-rending. I wasn't expecting the person to die, but it was a good and powerful touch to the end of ...

    May 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Her

    Hi! Hermione here for a review! I have read the book that this poem is talking about by Laurie Halse Anderson, and I agree with you, it's amazing. This poem ...

    May 17, 2015
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Dramatic Re: We are writers. We are dreamers.

    Hi! Hermione here for a review! I see that you're fairly new here, so welcome, and great job on this poem! It was very lovely and relatable, and I enjoyed ...

    May 12, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Heart of Glass

    Hi! Hermione here for a review. You did a wonderful job on this poem; it was beautiful. I only noticed a couple places where it seemed to not flow very ...

    May 8, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Limerence (Edited)

    This is very heartfelt poem yet you managed to word it seemingly effortlessly with simplicity. I enjoyed it a lot and could relate to some of the emotions you expressed. ...

    May 6, 2015


I say Wolf, for all wolves are not of the same sort; there is one kind with an amenable disposition – neither noisy, nor hateful, nor angry, but tame, obliging and gentle, following the young maids in the streets, even into their homes. Alas! Who does not know that these gentle wolves are of all such creatures the most dangerous!
— Charles Perrault