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herbgirl

  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Revelation

    Hello! herbgirl here for a review! So, to start, I'd like to say this is a very simple and sweet poem. The rhyme scheme contributes to that, and the poem ...

    Sep 4, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Bird

    Hello! herbgirl here for a review! I like this poem, it seems simple but you tell the story with emotion, which helps readers to relate to the character, or to ...

    Sep 3, 2016
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Past the Bedroom Door

    Hello! herbgirl here for a review! I'd like to start off by saying that I really like this poem! The imagery you use almost pulls readers back to their childhood, ...

    Sep 2, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Writhing

    Hello! herbgirl here for a review! I like this poem, as I like all your poems. You use impressive imagery, which is what always pulls me in, I especially liked ...

    Sep 1, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Drowning

    Hello! herbgirl here for a review! So, first of all, welcome to the site! I hope you enjoy your time here, and if you need help with anything, please let ...

    Aug 31, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Vellichor

    Hello! herbgirl here for a review! So, I'd like to start off by warning you that i have a pretty bad cold right now but didn't want to miss review ...

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Different

    Hello! herbgirl here for a review! So, I'd like to start off by saying that I have a pretty bad cold right now, so if any of my reviewing stuff ...

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: A Burden's Thanks

    Hello! herbgirl here for a review! So, I'd like to start off by warning you that I have a really bad cold right now, so if this review seems really ...

    Aug 27, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Where I Lie

    Hello! herbgirl here for a review! This is an interesting poem. To be honest, I'm not entirely sure what to think of it. You seem to be trying to get ...

    Aug 21, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: A Girl

    Hello! herbgirl here for a review! So, I realize this is going to have to be short, since this poem was so short, but I still have some things to ...

    Aug 20, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Through those Doors

    Hello! herbgirl here for a review! First of all, I wanted to say I can relate to some of this poem, as today was my first day of high school, ...

    Aug 19, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Anxiety

    Hello! herbgirl here for a review! This is an interesting poem. Your description of anxiety, though pretty accurate, seemed almost comical, especially since you used words like "big bear hug". ...

    Aug 17, 2016
  • Poetry » Review, General Re: Football

    Hello! herbgirl here for a review! So, when I first started in on this poem, I thought, 'Oh great, another silly poem praising someone's favorite thing,' but as I read ...

    Aug 16, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: Perfect... No

    Hello! herbgirl here for a review! Judging from this poem, you are going through a rough time, and I can understand that. I think I can relate to what you're ...

    Aug 16, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Heart Of Death

    Hello! herbgirl here for a review! Welcome to YWS! I like this poem. You express your feeling very eloquently, your descriptions of death are, I believe, something everyone can relate ...

    Aug 15, 2016


Find wonder in the everyday, find everyday language to articulate it.
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